This story is really great :D I totally disagree with yoko sereana lita.

Fabulous story!! ^-^ Ryou being an insane nut job?? Hmm... but, it all worked out in the end! ^-^ Awesome story!

liked it. But you really should put something in about the Linkin Park lyrics. Disclaimer or whatnot. well, toodles.

wah! good story! but sad!

Phoenix: ~kicks yoko sereana lita~ ... BAKA ONNA! YOU FLAME THIS STORY YOU DIE!

Leah: I fear for my life...

Phoenix: I have PSM and a gun. Be afraid, be VERY afraid... XD

Leah: she mean that: this is a great story and if there isn't a sequal you will die... ^_^;;

Sweet but rather abrupt...nevertheless, fantastic little story you have here, a job well done! Keep up the great work!

~Shuffle Queen~

Mana: O_O End?! THATS IT!? *dies*

Imani: I guess so o.o Darn no one died.

Amana: *bashes Imani with a bat*

Mena: *shoves Imani in a toaster*

Mana: *huggles Bakura and Ryou: ^.T *to you* I LOVE YOU! O_O I LOVE YOUR STORIES!

Mana: O_O *stabs the white suit men* DIE DIE DIE DIE-

Imani: I thought you liked white...

Mana: DIE DIE DIE *stabs driver that hit bakura*

Amana: Holy ra...

Mana: *stabs barney* DIE DIE DIE!

Mena: oo; *hides*

Mana: *stabs insanity* DI-what...I like being insane...

I,M,A: *anime fall*

Mana: *Depressed* ..so..sad...Wah...

Mana: *eyes brimming with tears* ...m...WAH! *waterfall tears* SO SAD MY HEART JUST SHATTERED HOLY RAA!

Imani: >> There's a second chapter..

Mana: O_O OMFR ARE YOU SERIOUS?!

Imani: -.- Yes.

Mana: *sreech* *runs off to read*

Amana: That..was sad..

Mena: Toaastteerr...T.T

Imani: *makes Atwa the snake wrap around mena's neck*

Mena: *turning blue*

I can't speak or cry or anything...oh god, that was so intense...

Oh... *sniff* Yami-Bakura gets feelings, but too late... wait, wouldn't he live? I mean, he's not technically alive to begin with... couldn't he teleport to the Ring at the last moment or something? *blinks* Another one of those things I'm missing...

Good fic, nicely laid out. Is the text interspaced within the story a song or a poem?

Love the way you fitted the Lullaby from Key the Metal Idol into the chapter, i love it!

So pretty. n.n; Of course, pretty could possibly be the wrong word. It was sad, and dark and angsty. But you know that.
Poor Baku baku. Poor both of them. >>; I cut myself twice, but I never got sent to the nut house. *Shrugs* I got sent to the counsillor (Almost as bad XD; )
We need more ficcys that end angsty~ ^_^ No happy, no happy!

Woah. Just woah! That was pretty angsty and dark. I haven't read something that deep in a while. I liked it. I loved it. I need a tissue!

*sniffle* Poor Ryou...Well, NEway, write more soon! i love this!