   BOOMrobotdog 2008-08-31 . chapter 10Kind of hard to understand. Think about getting a better beta. Like one whose native language is English. |
 sappjody 2008-08-18 . chapter 21hi, i just read your story and i can't waith
to see what's going to have next |
| sexy Seren 2008-07-21 . chapter 1 update it soon |
| Blue-Eyed-Snape 2008-07-05 . chapter 21 THIS STORY IS AWSOME! update asap |
| Jade Cade 2008-06-15 . chapter 21 Yay! Another great story! I see there are some lenghty periods between the chapters so I'm just hoping you might have another chapter ready for me? I've read and reviewed Miss You as well. Such wonderful stories! So update one of them soon.. please? And for now I'll trot off to read another masterpiece of yours, alright? |
 Hotaru Peacecraft 2008-06-14 . chapter 21So... when we will have a new chapter?? Not only in this fic but Miss You to?? I'm liking to read them but... I alredy read all the chapters... And waiting for news chapters is killing me!! Update soon please!! |
 MiniBloodyMurder 2008-06-11 . chapter 21OMG this is 5to cute,hot,dramatic,ect... oh oh ple4eas update sooner this story is just to awsome! |
| Ilamay 2008-06-04 . chapter 21 LOL! I love it! The characters are OOC but for the story is so good. It's awesome. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, I want to know how they gonna win over Voldemort. Thank for writing it. :) |
| little black lamb 2008-06-02 . chapter 1 your writing is a bit chaotic, half of the time i can't follow who is speaking or what the heck is going on. |
 WWEPrinzess 2008-03-27 . chapter 21update soon |
 TLDriver66 2008-03-05 . chapter 21You really need to work on your grammar. For example, parental should be parentage. Other than the grammar mistakes, it's a good story. |
 Mrs. Snape-Cullen 2008-02-24 . chapter 21“I am.” Draco pouted playfully. “So come shower me with your love and attention.”-very cute line!
“He was right, and I was stupid.” Severus ignored Harry’s triumphant cry. “I know I was nineteen years late, but it’s the right time to start over. You’re pregnant and our boy comes back to us. I want us to live as a family.”-well i could see this sceen playing out! very cute like
Thank you, Brat.” Severus growled.-lol very cute |
 Fire Dolphin 2008-02-06 . chapter 21please update soon. |
| sweetteetwo 2008-02-02 . chapter 21 I jumped for joy when I saw chapter 21
was posted Glad to see that Blasie moved
in with his parents and that Snape finnally
proposed to Siruis |
| Lazy Snake 2008-01-28 . chapter 21 Thank you for the update in this story. I really really love all your writings.
I anxiously await your next chapter. ^_^ |
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