|Reviews for Heart over Mind|
| Sylvia.I 4/21/13 . chapter 16
For some reason, this chapter reminded me of pride and prejudice, but I can't pin point exactly why. Lovely chapter.
| Muggles 4/19/13 . chapter 27
I know it has been years since you wrote this so I hope you are still seeing the reviews.
This was a beautiful story, so complex and wonderful to read.
Thank you for writing it.
| BellsStewart 4/18/13 . chapter 27
Overall the story is Amazing! However I wish there was more of a kick to the ending like a grand finale, other than that you have amazing writing talent! x
| AccaliaSnape 4/18/13 . chapter 27
Gosh I love this story. And pikey Severus? GENIUS.
| Tori 4/9/13 . chapter 27
The one word to describe this story is fascinating. Absolutely, brilliantly fascinating. From all the carefully woven-in facts to the threading of Hermione's muggle life and her wizard life to her entertaining and unique (and oh, so real) family to the plot and everything, you've created something magical here (in the Muggle sense of the word). And for that, I thank you.
| gottalovem 4/8/13 . chapter 15
Oh my god! You are driving me insane! I can't take it...
On to the next chapter :3
| Guest 4/7/13 . chapter 15
This is so good! :)
| Guest 4/6/13 . chapter 11
When do you think they will get into a relationship?
| Anon 4/6/13 . chapter 1
OK, I realize this was started ten years ago, so I won't quibble about the rest of the quality too much - that was early days. ;)
But I'm a bit lost -? Are you trying to say that everyone in class is willingly drinking a love potion which will make them feel romantically affectionate towards their Potions partner for a while? Because, hello, Harry and Ron! I'm sure there are plenty of other Potions pairings too who would find it pretty awful to like each other. After all, close friends often sit together for classes. How awful would it be to feel romantic toward your platonic best friend?! Yeah, I just don't get this one.
Also, why in the world is the "whole class" paying such close attention to the "drama" while they are, essentially, drugged? You'd think that stuff running through their systems would be at least a little distracting. Forgetting minor details like this can really pull a story down.
| Innocently-sassy 4/4/13 . chapter 27
I am disappointed this story ended. It's not usually a pairing I read, but I enjoyed it immensely nevertheless. You have a wonderful writing voice. I especially liked the chapters with letters.
I thought it could use more. Not sure if you were just tired of the story and wanted it to end. Would have liked to hear more about Hermione's animagus form or what Harry decided upon as his future (I seriously thought you'd make him the new DADA professor!). But, as I said, I loved the story anyway! I know it's been years since this was posted, but hopefully you'll still see the tons of positive reviews that this story garners.
(Also, I know you've mentioned it in your ANs, but awesome vocabulary! I've learned some new words from this. Definitely not something that can be said for most fanfics!)
| Mary 3/30/13 . chapter 27
I started reading this about 5 days ago and I haven't been able to stop reading it, I just finished it and I can honestly say that is by farthe best snermione story I've read. I love how you didn't revolve around sex for them to be happy, because honestly, had it been about that I would've stopped reading it. You insight on everything was impeccable! I usually don't leave reviews, but about halfway through I said to myself "I need to leave a review." I love how you formed their outlines, and how they interacted. It was all very real, and I just want to say that you've gained a new fan! Congrats on such a great story, and though I'm sad to see this one come to an end, I look forward to more of your stories!
| fluffy20456 3/23/13 . chapter 13
| cdd12 3/21/13 . chapter 27
| cherry.chan3425 3/17/13 . chapter 2
Very inetesting so far ;)
| angelthree117 3/15/13 . chapter 27
Okay, I admit I was never a Snape fan. I hated him through every book that I read and every movie that I saw, right up until the minute he died. Then, I couldn't help but have a healthy respect for the man and everything he put up with and did. Then my sister got into the HG/SS ship, and I thought it was a bit wierd, but hey, to each her own. I never ventured into the Harry Potter fanfic section, and never intended to. Yesterday I was reading a fic by an author in the Narnia fandom, and then read through the author's profile page and saw this story in her favorites. The summary struck me as interesting, so I figured I would give it a shot. After one particularly late night, and another hour today, I now find I have the need to go and read a bunch of other fics. Dang it! I loved this story, and found it very believable, and sweet, and fun to read. One question I still have is about the significance of the stars on Hermione's charm bracelet. I don't get it. As a side note, I don't usually yell at my computer screen when reading a story, but when Lupin interupted their first 'almost kiss', I started yelling. So well done there as well.