ah, how could you stop it there! i wish you'd update soon cause it's been so long. this is a really good story.

you've created a beautiful masterpiece yet oyu seem not to care whether it is finished or not. i hate reading half stories. finish up. too many people i know are irritated with your lack of care for the peace of mind of your readers. when you leave work unfinished, readers are left unstisfied. such works are so much better not started. please for our minds sake, finish what you started with breath you in.

I want more! I want more! Where's the rest of the story. I hope you haven't given up on it, because you just got to the good part. I love the story so far and wish that you would finish it. Please update soon!

This is very emotional and its beautifully written...a bit of grammer problems but I bet its because you don't read it over lol (I sometimes don;t want to either when I finish writing)Please update...you leave off at such an interesting place. I hope to read more soon

Have you abandoned us? PlEASE UP-DATE. THIS FIC IS EXTRAORDINARILY FABULOUS!
if you could find it in your heart to return to this fic i will...give you a big cookie ^_^
Keep writing!

oh please plase update. this is so good. please UPDATE!

You know this is a great story I do hope that you update it. I want to see serena reaction to how painful Darien past really is. I do love the class room scenes the make good points. Plz update this story. this can be something grand.

really great story so far. :)

Storyline is very interesting. And you stopped right *there*. Sigh, life can be unfair.
I hope your life is setting fairly enough to update this story. A whole year has passed since this last chapter...

Hi your story is really good, i really enjoy reading, how come u havn't updated them! PLease update soon, im waiting!
JO

I love this fic please finish it!

This is a great story I love how you interlaced literature into it. I think so far my favorite part is how you juxtaposed Darien's real childhood with how he told Serena it was great!

update please, yes, its been a while... but the story is unfolding... taking a big step righ tnow.

i assume serena will go back to him and be all touchy because of what ahppened to him.

But keep in mind, - nvr mind
look, he lied to her. He didnt trust her so he lied to her. That way she wouldnt have to worry about him. That way there was nothing keeping him with her.
This isnt the first time he does things to push her away.
She needs to wake up and see he's turning out to not be worth the trouble. He doesnt show anything towards her.
Reality is that if a guy is that way to you, he wants nothing to do with you rite? ... well, as far as my small brain goes it does. [dont worry, i m not THAT stupid]

I was hoping that you can open darien up just a bit. The only thing he's done that serena really knows about it carrying her when HE HIT HER. So that could'vr just been respsibnility.
So please, something from darien.
He hit her! OMG hit HER, i know it was an accident but... HE HIT HER> seriously, being a semi-spoiled brat i get my ways, i tell you know, if anyman hits me, he's a dead man.
yes, yes i know...

Ah! I read this story about a year ago and I've been looking for it like hell the past week. Haha. Great story you have here. Update soon!

This is really well-written. Love the plot. Can't wait to read more.