aw! i love melXgene! they are my altime favorite anime couple! totally cute story!

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This is so KAWAII! Even if it is SO short! This is just adorable, I love it! I am a 100% Gene/Melfina couple lover!
Anyways, AWESOME job! You Rock! Keep up the good work in other stories! (Just don't make the stories so short >_

Nice! I like the cute fluff.

O.O! OMIGOD! THAT was SO CUTE AND GOOD AND WONDERFUL! ^_^ I absolutely LOVED that! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for writing It! write more more more! I want to see more stories like this! please?! ^^ your an EXCELLENT author! Thank you again! ~Meiko =^-^=

Beautifully written, they aren't many works of art like this out there. Your technique of written is quite decriptive and focused. Your talent is visible, comtinue writting. If you do not it would be a waste.

~Wings Of Grace~

i think this story's really cute!

aw, so kawaii, so kawaii! (^.^) i think i'm going to cry it so sweet!

hey girl that was so good.i'm writing an ouwtlaw story right now. i hope you finish. is this the only story you wrote, if its not please send me your other stories. bye bye

It was completly romantic/My sis and I loved it(Even though i'm a guy I still go for the romantic things can't I?)

kawaii-ness! ^_^

wonderfully done!

Good good! Very romantic. No grammar or spelling mistakes that I can see. A little ordinary, but that's never TOO bad. I give it a thumbs up.

Thats was so pretty nice work!

It's great. very romantic the last part. please email me if u write another one of the mushy romantic things cause i need to learn it at reitaichi3@yahoo.com

bravo just utter and total bravado i salute you for making this fic ... great!