Aw...you made Meiling mean..well kinda...ooh...this is a very cool story! Good job! ^_^

YOU ...I ALSO HATE THIS! Kai!? Demolition boys? WHAT IS THE HECK IS THIS!REDO THIS DAMMED CRAP!DO YOU HEAR!

Interesting. I never heard of a story like this before but there's always a first!

yo!! keep it up it's great!!

I liked your story. Very interesting twist at the end.

I don care wut nobody say. i like it.