 TemperTemper 2008-12-02 . chapter 11I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I am only finally getting around to watching Angel now.. and this was just SO good. I loved every word, and miss Doyle. Thank you for sharing what was obviously a true labour of love :) |
 Lisa0316 2008-08-25 . chapter 11A friend directed me over here, telling me this was the best Doyle story on the web...IT IS. That was absolutely lovely, thank you for writing it. |
 otahyoni 2008-06-11 . chapter 10I read this story ages ago and loved it, but didn't bookmark it in any way - for some stupid reason. Now, rewatching Angel season one and mourning Doyle all over again, I came looking for fic - and rediscovered this.
Just as striking and dark and hilarious and irresistible as the first time. I could not stop reading.
Fave-ing it this time, so I can come back more easily. Thanks for a fabulous story. |
 Scourge of Europe 2008-05-13 . chapter 11I wouldn't typically read a Cordelia centered story but this one had me hooked from beginning to end. Excellently written and a read well worth the time! |
 j 2008-05-12 . chapter 11 this story is so good, one of the best ive read accully. If you have time and want to I would love to read a sequal |
 Marcus S. Lazarus 2008-02-26 . chapter 11Wow.
Yeah, I'd say 'Wow' pretty much covers it.
Seriously, if they'd ever ACTUALLY done a 'Doyle resurrection' story, I somehow doubt they could have made it HALF as powerful as you did this one.
All of Cordelia's reactions to the situation she found herself in were brilliantly described. From the moment she realised that she had been transported back to when Doyle was alive, to that brief moment after her near-death with the Beacon when she thought that she hadn't changed anything, I REALLY felt what she was feeling when those events took place.
Her shock and joy at finding Doyle alive, her awkwardness at trying to figure out a way back without revealing too much before she was ready, her grief when she thought she'd lost the first person to see her as more than just the cheerleader...
It was all there, and it was all brilliant.
And the full scale of Wolfram & Hart's plot with Angel in the end... driving him to despair to conceive a child that they could use to bring about their apocalypse?
To say that is one of the most evil things I ever read is a serious understatement; evil is not MEANT to be patient enough to wait for one SPECIFIC event to happen!
OK, so the Mayor waited a hundred years to Ascend; at least he knew WHEN he'd get the chance to do anything, even if he didn't know the specific details about what would happen when it did.
Talking of time, I found the idea of the Time Demon to be a particularly interesting concept, and the addition of the 'IWRY' references- one of my all-time-favourite eps, I might add; one of those great episodes that can make you smile even as it leaves you in tears- only added to my appreciation of the story.
And as for that brief glimpse of the alternate timeline Future Cordelia created by leaving those notes for her past self...
Any chance you could do something looking at the specifics of the changes she made at some point? Because I have to admit, I would DEFINITELY like to see what kind of a beating Wolfram & Hart took now that Angel and his team were armed with knowledge from the future...
Would they have even REALISED what was happening until the end?
If Angel Shanshued, I somehow doubt it.
There's just one problem I have with this story; the Time Demon's comment that there's no such thing as 'alternate universes'.
It's a minor detail, I know, but if alternate universes don't exist and there's simply versions of people according to the timeline they exist in, how could Vamp Willow have come through to our reality back in 'Dopplegangland'? I mean, since Willow never WAS that version of her- what with Anya's necklace having been broken and that timeline having never been created in the first place-, it shouldn't have been possible to summon her using the Time Demon's 'rules' of temporal mechanics...
And that is just an example of why I think about these things WAY too much and should just enjoy the story at times; it's a relatively minor detail in the grand scheme of things, and it does VERY little to detract from my enjoyment of the story.
Once again, a FANTASTIC bit of writing; keep up the good work! |
 Princess-Lalaith 2007-12-01 . chapter 11OMG OMG OMG OH MY GOD!
This is just...in a word...AWESOME!
I love it! I more than love it!
This is deffinitely one of the bestest fics I've ever read! Really! It's just so...wonderfully perfect (I'm not sure if that combination of words is gramatically correct but I don't really care either).
You know that for a second there I thought that history would really repeat itself. That Doyle would end up dying for some reason or another. But not only he didn't die but the past Cordelia managed to change Everything with the leads left by the future one before she 'died'.
It's just terrific!
My congratulations for your work, I really enjoyed reading it. |
 MistressDarkness 2007-11-08 . chapter 11awesome story. absolutely loved it. definitely one of the best i've read. and i wasn't expecting that ending. The gauntlet not working on the beacon surprised me, i thought i had it all figured out. i had to read this all in one sitting, it was too good. keep up the great work |
 Mayhem Managed 2007-04-04 . chapter 11Just found this fic after watching "Hero", and I must say, although I had no idea what was up with the 'uptime' scenes (not having got that far yet), I heartily approve of what you did to the 'downtime'. Fav'ed! |
 Greywolf Lupous 2007-02-07 . chapter 11Oh my god! Best! Story! Evar! I |
 Silverblade219 2006-09-23 . chapter 11loved it. read it in all one sitting and now it's getting really late.
i loved how you wrote the cordelias.
i would write more but i need to get to sleep soon. sorry
great story |
 ganainm 2006-09-05 . chapter 10I'm reading this story for the second time ... I had to review on this chapter because I already reviewed the last one.
I just wanted to say... I am deeply appreciative of your efforts to create a lovely story. I am in a bit of stress at the moment (getting ready to move to a different country for school), and it was just what I needed.
Thank you. |
 ForcedSmile 2006-07-19 . chapter 11That was the best story ever! |
 finkpishnets 2006-07-19 . chapter 11Beautiful story! Exactly what I was looking for. How I miss him. Your little note to Glenn at the end made me cry - truth be told, I would do it for him too in a heartbeat. Really amazingly done. |
 fugaziclash 2006-05-25 . chapter 11Absolutely fantastic. A worthy tribute to a man and a character that both died too soon. |