That was hilairious, and pretty kickass, my most favorite fanfics are humor stories, we need more humor stories to throw off the serious nature of so many things, you should continue it, that was good

*cracks up laughing* It's not a poor attempt! Rofl! Poor Hotsuma... Finally has sex and boy can't remember it! *pities him* ... *bursts out laughing again*

I like it but i have one question isnt ageha moritsume girl

That was great, espeacially for a fic about drugs!

hahaha. extremely short, but to the point. very to the point. they got to sex very quickly. life should be like that.

You did fine, I like this! I'm the one for a poor excuse for a humor fic in my bloody roar story called Take Away. Anyways loved this!

This made me giggle uncontrollably for about 15 min. prior to reading! You can cook, can't you? Then I shall make you my chef when I overtake the world! But seriously...write more in the Shinobi section! I have two fics ready to be posted, and there are only 7 fics in this category. Shinobi is such a great game, i know we can do better than this!

Have a nice day, 'CAUSE I SAID SO! xD

Poor attempt? That was funny man I tried puting a spoof ver of a game on this website and it got flamed to hell your lucky you got good reviews.

It wasn't a poor job, it was slightly humorous. Good job! Keep writing!

thank you finally someone wrote a shinobi fic! You did a good job!

that was rich but man that would suck if it happened to me