CH1
Well, that was just confusing.

CH2
Good hook.

CH3
I'm guessing one of his parents isn't? Then again maybe Shinji is
a clone of Gendo.

CH4
I think Misato could give great advice. Of course most of it
would probably work better on a honeymoon...

CH6
You just had to get our hopes up didn't you?
Damn dream sequences...

CH7
Clone of Adam?

CH8
Cool. I was right!

CH9
OK I was wrong. He is Adam. Twisted plot line.

CH16
The ending was a bit too detached for me. I did like
Kaoru having his eyes torn out, that was a nice touch tho'.

I though the whole deal with Lillith was she didn't want to do it with Adam which is why she was sent off to Nod or wherever. Nevermind I'm nitpicking.

Great story!

somehow you managed to catch the essense of the plot of evangelion. (Of course no one could hope to match the psychological portion) It was all twisted just the same...hmm.. the plot of eva seems to be incomplete anyway. Some of us wish we could truly know for sure some of the physical aspects of the series.

interesting if some what rushed, at least it feels rushed to me. Still it is a good story. Ja-ne =(^_^)=

Well, this was one HELL of a transition. Ya got a lot of attention here in this area, so I'd suggest to keep on going and see what spills out. Why not your version of EOE!
Let's see what happens!

dennisud

That was pretty damn gay.

And with one of the most cliched endings possible.

OH IT WAS ALL A DREAM OH MY.

* assumes a meditative pose. *

Well, I was afraid this would end as some cruel darkfic but I must admit you made me eat back at least part of what I've written in my last review.
I still think the end came too fast but you gave your reasons. And the end was a happy one so I can't complain. :)
Having Shinji, Rei, the survivors (and by the looks of it all the people claimed.) in an Eva-less world was an interesting idea, it would be interesting to know how the others live in this new world but it seems right to stop here.

Good story. Sometimes weird, but good.
Original ideas, what is always good.

I hope you write more EVA-fics.

Greetings,
STEVE

interesting story, but what happens next?

When Kaoru was introduced in chapter 12, it seemed it would add some interesting twist in the Rei/Lilith - Shinji/Adam "relationship". But as things turned, his entrance in the story served no purpose. And to be honest, I can't but think that the last two chapter were rushed. I really hope you can wrap everything in the end.

interesting Whats next?

woah, this is getting creepy. I can't belive she um.took Kaoru's eyes. The way he's acting is also kind of ooc I think, but I still wan't to know what happens. I hope it's a happy ending.

This is very interesting please continue soon. Ja-ne =(^_^)=

Interesting so far. Ja ne =(^_^)=

Kaoru = **

Soon he'll be going after Shinji's body for his own evil intentions. *shudders* I hope Adam/Shinji gives Kaoru a nice Pimp slap, or Lillith and Adam 'AT Field Samwitch' Tabris for melding in their plot for world destruction. Anyway.

Nice chapter, rather _short_ but still advances the story's plot along.