Oh poor Ferio!! anyways is Eagle and fuu siblings or a couple?..
i love your story so much..
keep up the good work..Ja ne!

sorry for the late review!^^
gr...that Ferio was really UNgentleman!imagine, slapping a girl like Umi?! gr...if i were Umi, i would have slapped him back and punched him!
now i know why Umi's so adamant on separating Ferio from Fuu...and why Eagle's Fuu's boyfriend...okei, cleared a lot of questions in my head...and now i know why Umi's overprotective of Fuu...
hah...poor Fuu, 'ne? i hope she gets that heart transplant somewhere in your succeeding chapters...^^
update soon!^^
the fight scene between Ferio and Umi was really hilarious!hahaha!^_^

Yay! You updated! *does little happy dance*
Anyway, okay, I see what you mean when Ferio was just trying to punish Umi. Phew! Damn, I thought he was cheating on Fuu! But he wasn't. And that's what makes everything right in the world. *flowers spring up like crazy and the sun comes out, shining like the fires of Hell, except in a pretty way*
Great chappie! Lots of fighting and stuff. I like the part where Umi vomited, threw up, hurled, lost her lunch, whatever you wanna call it. It was funny! *dodges the objects hurled by Umi fans* ^^;;

Oh! i wish you could update quicker ^^ i like it how there there are mixed couplings, because, honestly, after a while, the same couplings do get boring *cough* my story for one *cough*.
I like how you mixed them, it's a nice and original plot, and Ferio gets much more of a say in this fic, compaired to others...your is more based around him as well as Fuu and the others ^_^ i hope you keep going and finish, i understand it's hard if you work or school, with all the work you have to do...another reason why i don't update often ^^; (it's not like i mean to!)
Well, i hope this review lightens your day, it lightened mine when i wrote it ^^
Love always, and peace for all
Bunny Fuu-fuu

Hi Sissi!
I didn't review your last chapter did I? =0( I'm so sorry! I thought I did, I truly thought so, but I checked and I didn't! =0( Sorry again! Anyways onto the review!

This chapter was good. Lol, nice little "battle" you had there in the beginning. Lol, I loved the little side comments like "... And I am being too melodramatic. Sorry. Let’s return to the story." And, "Should I hug you as well?" Lol, it adds a nice little connection between the reader and the story. (Or at least I thought so. =0) )
The conversation at the end explains a lot of actions on Umi's part. And, goodness me, Emeraude just had to walk in on that part and get the very wrong idea. ::embarrassed for them:: Wow, well SUPER GREAT chapter! I look forward to the next update!
Alimoe =0D

I feel better now...
Ok but this is still sad!
Fuu/Ferio 4 ever!

Well, you know I loved the chapter lots! And the end of it. Wow! What's Ferio planning. I will wait to find out. Keep up the great work! This story is the best!

What the hell does he think he's gonna do?!
So he forgot Fuu or what!
I demand an explanatoin! Hopefuly in the next chapter!
But that was still an awsome chapter!
Hurry it up PLEASE!
LOVE...Fuu/Ferio!

O it's so sweet^^ heh, i never knew Ferio would be intrested in Umi...what a twist...the same with Fuu and Eagle...^_^
Please update soon ^_^

I really love this story, not only because I am a GREAT Fuu|Ferio fan, but also because I really like the way you write. I hope the story will go on, and a happy ending, I would really cry if something happened to Fu!
Well, any way, I just wanted to congratulate you.
Atte Kaze

Wow, I never thought Ferio would be as serious or as um crazy? To that extent. My gosh, he's gonna kiss Umi! And what about Fuu, Ah this is all wrong, this is one giantic mess damn it! WHAT IS WRONG WITH HIM??
Good work, I'm just kind rambling here...

hwow!^_^ what a great chapter(as usual..^_^)...
was that really Ferio..?! i know he's kinda playful and mischievous,but i never pictured him THAT playful!^_^ but anyways, i hope u'd really not kill Fuu...that would be a shame...and this is an F/F fic, right?! Ferio's just playing with Umi...right?!^_^
anyways, update soon!^_^ and may u have a very happy new year!^_^

what in the world is ferio doing?
ok. um, to answer your question, microsoft word has a spellcheck that corrects grammar, also. you can download it from this site, i think.
office.microsoft.com/downloads/20/wd97vwr32.aspx
good chapter, even though i'm a bit mad at ferio.
what about fuu?!

great fic! I hope you update soon!
and if you are willing to take constructive criticism, could you run the chapters through spellcheck (if you have it) before uploading?
For example: "I am one such lucky guy."
You could take out the "such" and make it "I am one lucky guy," or take out the "one" and make it "I am such a lucky guy."
anyways, great story!

Thats GREAT! Update soon Please
Pretty PLEASE!
I love Fuu/Ferio!!