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Blue Melody
2007-08-25
ch 1, anon.
abuse...ZOMG! =O

Sorry about that, but your story has me in fits of laughter right now. As I was reading I became more horrfied at just what was happening - until you revealed that it was the dentist though!

A classic work gone orginal. Good job!
Satu-D-2
2007-04-01
ch 1,
abuseHehehe... that's so funny... Sold to them...aha! *serious* I hate the dentist... *not serious* hehe...quivering child...hehehe..
Kimyou Doll
2006-05-13
ch 1,
abuseLOL! I went from "who is this guy?" to nearly dying in laughter! Great job to you both!
CornflowerBlue
2006-05-02
ch 1,
abuseHahaha!! I'd really like to see Vegeta and the others in that state. I can't believe a visit with the dentist would cow the grat warriors...but then again, I have this nagging feeling that it might! That was really great, really funny!
Lady Enomis
2005-12-14
ch 1,
abuseThat was...interesting. It started out really seeming like some sort of torture...technically going to the dentist most times IS torture but hey...Good story, tho; I like the twist, even though I knew it was coming.
storm-of-insanity
2005-11-19
ch 1,
abusei thought taht was hillarius. at first i thought they were going to have and injection at the hospital but ehn i worked out it was the dentist. that was such a funny idea. it's like anotehr fic taht i was reading in the beyblade section and it sounded like the main character was in some kind or life and death battle but all hye was it was a quaser/laser quest game
LA Suka
2005-10-14
ch 1,
abuseI feel like such an idiot thank you very much... *sweat drop* I thought it was for real; oh you got me good! Good job.
Miko Kikyou
2005-07-02
ch 1,
abusegoku wouldnt have gone except under force. lots of force, and why was vegeta so afraid? oh well, it was a good fic, and a bit funny too.
Dark Hope Assassin
2005-03-26
ch 1,
abuseMan!! That was truly hilarious, I must say! Lol! A killer fic, really! Lol... Loved it totally! It was really angsty. At first I thought that they were going to get some injections, because Goku is said to be terribly afraid of needles, but this one was a better idea! Lol! Really nice!
Garowyn
2004-09-21
ch 1,
abuseLOL Very good!
Zelgadis55
2004-07-18
ch 1,
abuseI have decided! I really love your fics :) I started reading your earlier ones as a result of enjoying your latest Saiyuki fic and they are so funny, at least the ones I have read so far, which is only a few. How you manage to turn something so ordinary as going to the dentist into something so hilarious, I don't know, wish you could tell me your secret! Though I honestly can't blame Vegita and Goku for their dislike for the dreaded place... and as for Vegita, of course it would be worse for him. He's not human, he wouldn't have had to endure something so ... alien before. I love the line in his thoughts 'They had broken Kakarrott, and he was next.' I believe I am off to read another :)
Goku's Angel & Gavroche-Gir...
2004-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseGoku's Angel: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! The DENTIST?! AH! SAVE ME!

Gavroche-Girl: Hahahahahahaha! I hate the dentist too, I laughed so hard I banged my head! owie! good job, keep up the good work! hehe hee heh!
LupinGoddess
2004-04-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseOkay, I've only read up to the point where Vegeta is laid down on this horizontal chair and though this isn't specified as a comedy... this is a dentist's office isn't it?
ChocolateEclar
2003-09-29
ch 1,
abuse*falls out of her chair laughing* That was great! Poor guys. *laughs harder* This was a cute concept.

Bye! ^__^
chibitrunk
2003-08-31
ch 1,
abuseI like this fic a lot! I mean a lot! Nothing beats a bunch of warriors fearing for their life over something as humane as a dental visit. Wonderfully cratted! I'm surprised our dear prince could keep himself from murdering the evil dentist. LoL!
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