 ChristinaAngel 2009-10-14 . chapter 28I liked how Harry became cursed in the first place, by saving Snape's life and how he made Draco rethink his future as a Death Eater as well. The Dursleys really were irredeemable in this fic, feeling joy at Harry's death and not concerned about him at all but rather only out for the money. That was disgusting but added an interesting obstacle in the story.
I loved how Ron and Draco managed to carry Harry away so he can stay there and how Dobby helped. The way to get to the gardens was dangerous and the gardens themselves seemed very interesting, I think I'll always remember the killer bunnies.
I loved Remus' passive aggressive way of putting the Dursleys in their place and how Sirius scared them all silent. I liked the idea of Neville having a Seer's dream, it really helped Harry.
The revenge against the Dursleys was brilliant and just so perfect for them because it was their magical blood that activated it.
I loved how you managed to make Neville and Harry both the focus of the story, even when Harry wasn't really present in the chapters. It was brilliant how in helping a friend Neville managed to help his parents as well, I love it! |
 Luiz4200 2009-09-21 . chapter 28Good work. |
 Luiz4200 2009-09-20 . chapter 12"Did something happen that I should know about? Something about a 'wiggly tail'?"
"Oh, er, Professor Dumbledore, sir. Professor McGonagall. Um. No, no. Sorry, didn't see you there. The, uh, fat one blocked the view, I s'pose."
"Hagrid."
Sigh. "Oh dear."
Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehe. Should have known it was a matter of time until Hagrid let it out what he did to Dudley. |
 Luiz4200 2009-09-20 . chapter 9"There is only thing I might thank one of you for. Could you . . ."
"Yes, Professor Snape?"
"I . . . when the floor gave way, I . . . dropped my wand. Would . . . would one of you . . . recover it by casting Accio?"
Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe. |
 t wrecks 2009-09-02 . chapter 28Neville the hero, great story |
 t wrecks 2009-09-02 . chapter 24Perfect amount of angst and urgency |
 t wrecks 2009-09-02 . chapter 22very good |
 t wrecks 2009-09-02 . chapter 17Oh cool |
 t wrecks 2009-09-02 . chapter 15very good plot |
 t wrecks 2009-09-02 . chapter 14Great story, I am glad I happened across it in someone's favorites |
 Katio 2009-08-11 . chapter 9I love snape! XD |
 Katio 2009-08-11 . chapter 28wow, I loved this story. the plot line and character development were very well thought out. go neville! |
 hypercell 2009-03-15 . chapter 28This was great! I really liked it! no, I love it! |
 hypercell 2009-03-15 . chapter 12This is an amazing story! I love it...You can't this, becasue that wouldn't be good for the story,and you have some creative liberties,But Muggles can't see Hogwarts... |
 hypercell 2009-03-14 . chapter 10another thing...it isn't called the Dark Forest...It is the Forbidden Forest. |