THIS IS JACKED UP INUYASHA JUST HAD TO KILL NARAKU WHY COULDNT U LET KIKYO KILL HERSELF INSTEAD OF BRINGING INUYASHA BACK TO LIFE
THAT WAY KAGOME AND NARAKU COULD'VE STAYED TOGETHER
personally they're a good couple
BUT THATS NOT THE POINT
and i dont know what the point is
THIS IS STILL JACKED UP THOUGH

that was beautiful. i loved the ending. you should create another one soon.

i wasnt able to finish it as of yet but all in all its good. i like it.

Oh I love it I give it a 200 ^_^ I hope u write more stories.

Please update, Jewel Shards, Arigami and One Big Squirrel,

Please

I Love The Chapter:13 !!

ggreat stuff ^^ hope to see more from you keep up the great work!

This story is awsome i hope you finish it soon!

DUDE!
Your stories awsome!
=^^=
I can't wait till you post some mone!

this is an awsome story finish it soon

So far this story's taken a lot of intesting turns.All I have to say is that potion better do something real good.(incase you haven't figured out I'm a major critic)

I just have one question and that is WHY IN THE ALL THE SEVEN HELLS DID GOD DAMNIT YOU PUT KAGOME AND NARAKU TOGETHER?!?!?!?!?!

So far it's pretty good,though there's no way inuyasha died permenently.That and is Kagome going to be like this for only some of the story or the whole story?

So far this is kinda remindin me of the fanfic transformations. Exept she turned into a catdemon instea of a blue wolfdemon. Besides that good beginning chapter, it got straight to the point.

You storie is very well done. great job.