Woah...
This is way different from any story I've ever read. The descriptions are interesting but can be a little confusing - you may want to neaten them up a little. The language used to construct the story is interesting and attention-holding, and it really builds the mystery. I'm quite curious as to what will happen next!
The dialogue is interesting but it can be a little... I don't know, insubstantial? I don't know, there's just something a little off about how people talk.
But aside from that, this is terrific. There's an actual plot instead of just walking from town to town and beating the gym leaders. Plus she took a few losses - that's good. It's more realistic. No one can win everything.
Plus, the fighting here isn't straight hit-and-hit-and-dodge-and-hit. There's variety, strategy, and thinking and consideration of what should come next. I really appreciate stuff like that: you don't see it often enough.
Even though this story appears to be temporarily abandoned, I'll be waiting for the next time you write!

hey, I havent read much of this so far but from what I have it looks excellent. I hope you can keep thinking of chapters to write as I am eagerly waiting.

how does she beat the Captain's Nightshade? great so far keep going. next chapter a.s.a.p

OH MY GOD! I JUST SO DID A DOUBLE TAKE!! Ga! *hugs* YOU UPDATED! *dances* I remembered instantly how much I use to enjoy this fic once I began to read it again! ^.^

Okay. . . review time! ~_^
First of all: you're writing is back & better than ever. The pharagraphs, dialouge, flow - it was all fantastic!

I like Rose. She's the kinda girl I can admire! & I loved the little personalities of Haunter and Ghastly. You rock at conveying Pokemon. & Rafael is TOO cute and awesome! I missed this fic.

Have I mentioned before how much I like the name Willow? Hm? Well, I do! heh - I'm random. ^_^;

So. . . how does she defeat Capt. Marius? Tell me! Update! hee hee!

Maia ^_^

Ohmigosh! Don't stop there! 0_0 this is wicked cool & SO suspenceful!

You improve with every chappie and I love this!
It's SO orignial.

I love Rose & Rafael!

I am so interested in Team Blade!

Continue!

Maia *hugs*

Ohmigosh! I love this fic! It's been way to long since I've read it!!

Willow is still a GREAT character!

I liked this line:
-Flattening herself against the wall in the building’s shadow, she glanced down the street. -
I can totally picture her against the wall, all sneaky and careful-like.

The Slicer is SO freaky! Gawd!

& What? her jaw drops in shock?? 0_0 AH, cliffie!

WRITE MORE! Maia

I like that name. Lunus the Bulbasaur

Hazel: Another cliffie...darn you
Beka: Go Rafael! ^^
Hazel: How come you're in such a good mood?
Beka: I dunno...I just like things with evil eyes...and there's lots of evil-eyed pokemon in this chapter! =^^=
Hazel: *slaps forehead* Update soon

Hazel: I'm really sorry we didn't review this earlier. ^^'' Gomen
Beka: And now we're left at a cliffhanger. How annoying...
Hazel: Nice chapter! ^^ Update soon!

Wow that was a rush! What a nice up-tempo chappie!
I like Arturo ^_^ . . handy to have around!
Maia

Hi Subieko, here's the link to that picture. It's not great, but at least it was fun to do.
http://img17.photobucket.com/albums/v51/moonpixie/celandine.gif

Hazel: Hm. Arturo reminds me of Mew2 in a way...
Beka: Really?
Hazel: Yes. BTW I updated Peacebringer if you're interested. I've nearly finished reading this! Yay! It's dead good, as always. Keep it up! :)

Hazel: Oh, cliffhanger! But I can just read on, nyahaha. Metal trees?
Beka: I know, ridiculous isn't it?
Hazel: Be nice! I thought it was a great chapter! And the paragraphs are getting smaller! That's good!

Hazel: Cool! Ghosts! This chapter was really good. I could never have written something as great as this...*reads wistfully* Alas...
Beka: Oh shut up complaining

Hazel: Mark. Is he a threat? That was a good chapter. But could you split your big blocks of writing into smaller paragraphs? It's easy to get lost.
Beka: Katsu...I like that name...
Hazel: Me too. Well, bye for now!