Dude. Emily. You are pure talent in and out! I long for your creativity. I miss the ** at dairy queen and staying up your toosh of course, I wish they would stop giving me the slow business routine and get me back in there. But I finally did this because I remembered oh goosh I havent done the R/R for emily yet! This one is probably by far my favourite; I like the style and nice suspense there. I mean you have me on the edge of my seat.

Yaa yet another great chapter.

on to the next one.

Hi whats up? anayway started to read this story way way way WAY back when you were wrighting for the (church of lemons).I have been wondering what the end is and now I can finly know. :}

interesting...off to read more!

I love your story and it's great that your pome is being pubilshed but...er...what happened to Sesshomaru and Rin?

great story i liked it very much. Maybe sometme u an read one of my stoies and you can tell me if i am any good!!

Awesome sis, Beautiful ending to your story :D Keep up the writing!! Love ya Sanc

Very good. I liked this, overall. smooth, well-written (sheesh, i sound like my english teacher...) I do have one question. What happened to Rin?

I absolutely LOVE this story. I read your other lemon and I loved it as well. Keep up the good work! ^_^

BEAUTIFUL! I LOVED IT! ~CRYS!~

ah great story one real good one i liked it a lot good work

sequel! please continue but great story

Good last liner I enjoyed reading. Good luck on future works.

That was beautiful! I really like the last line... I think I'm going to cry. Anywho I can't wait for more evne if this is the end of this story.

Very nicely written. You are a very talented writer and I look forward to more of your stories.