  Livie 2003-07-04 . chapter 2 wow. sexy.
i am thouraghly turned on by this chapter. i just sneezed my my computor. . .well. . yours. learn to spell and keep up teh good work. |
| Liv 2003-07-04 . chapter 1 you rare. . . .so beautiful. . .to me.. . . cant you se.
well. . now that ive got that out of my system, ill go ahead ad review your story.
it was gloriuos, spontanious, gelitanious, and most of all. . . . horribly spelled. but that just adds to the charm.
all you need now is wild unprotected sex and youre set as a pie in july. |
 Butterfly5 2003-06-30 . chapter 3Too cute! I love this story! You have a wonderful, flowing writing style. Please keep going! |
| Red Magic Marker 2003-05-08 . chapter 3 AWESOME chappie!
Thankies
Kendall |
| Jessy E 2003-05-03 . chapter 3 hehe. This is getting good. update asap |
| LE 2003-05-03 . chapter 2 that was a great begining story |
| freeddyis cool 2003-05-02 . chapter 1 WOW!! I LOVE YOUR STORY IT IS SO GOOD PLEASE UPDATE VERY VERY SON. YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER EVER! |
| kaylekatie 2003-05-02 . chapter 2 WOW U RULE! hi, im katie and i loved ur stories. I thought that everything moved along smoothly, and now ur stories are on my favorite list. keep updating and writing...One criticism: enuf of th estupid jokes; u must think that ur British! Theyre not funny! keep up the good work! |
| jadoreme 2003-05-02 . chapter 1 WOW: ur story was really great. I can't believe how good ur characters are, they were so well rounded and i really felt as if i knew them. However, maybe u could include more romance between the youngins, the James and Lily thing is getting old. JK Rowling would be proud. |
| honeycakes 2003-03-12 . chapter 1 What am amazing writer, that young cheesy beef. She writes with such flair, and that james potter, well i went bright red as she explained that hunk a hunk burning love!
Cheers to the lot of u! |
| lady stardust 17 2003-03-12 . chapter 2 I LOVE UR STORY
IT IS SO GOD
UPDATE SOON |
| lady stardust 17 2003-03-12 . chapter 1 i LOVE UR STORY IT IS SO GOD |
| Red Magic Marker 2003-03-03 . chapter 2 LOL! That chappie was great! Can wait to see(read) what she comes up with to get him back! Oh, the hair! I would have Killed him if i were her! But anyhoo, I will be holding you to that promise that you will update soon!
Thankies
Kendall |
| Jessy E 2003-03-03 . chapter 2 You got me. I am hooked on this fanfiction. Please update asap. This is hilarious. |
| Red Magic Marker 2003-02-04 . chapter 1 OH! I just love this! I was so LMAO!!!!!! I can not wait to find out what his revenge will be! Well, do hurry with another chappie soon!
lol!
Kendall AKA Red |
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