You won my canon-loving heart with the use of "Kalimac" and "Fatty Lumpkin." I already have a good deal of affection for Milo, and I can't wait to see how things go for him and his friend Kali. One question: is Griffo going off to battle as well? That might pose a problem, as he obviously doesn't like Milo. (Why am I thinking of Lotho and Frodo?) This is a great chapter!
What an epic you're writing here! You perfectly set up a peaceful, rural community, going about its daily business, suddenly hit with the unimaginable. And a very nice touch with the name Kalimac! Very impressive.