i really liked this story but it was a bit unsettling because it took me the entire story to figure out that this was Francies last night. Very well done overall.

Different, and beautiful. A great piece of work =)

This is great, please continue I can't wait to see where this is headed

Oh, you should write a sequel with Paul coming in the next day (or two days later... I think that's the right timeline.) and being served by the FrancieClone instead of the real deal. Does he sense something is amiss? How much does he pick up on?

Oh, you should write a sequel with Paul coming in the next day (or two days later... I think that's the right timeline.) and being served by the FrancieClone instead of the real deal. Does he sense something is amiss? How much does he pick up on?

Oh, Jenai, this fic is so sweet! Now *I* can't stop smiling. :) I really like how you've set it up so that this stranger can tell how happy Francie is with Will, and I love how you have Paul asking Francie if she'd like him to wait for her to close up. Bu throwing that in there, it only furthers intensifies our desire for Paul to stick around because we all know what happens once he leaves the restaurant. :( But fantastic job filling in this missing scene. I would have loved to see it in the ep.

WONDERFUL fic!! I squealed AND spazzed, tres cute :) Observers POV fics always rule, paricularly shippy observers :)

Got a little lump in my throat over Paul's story *sniff*

Great writing :)

That was a really good beginning. Hopefully we will see some romance between Francie and Paul!