I read that you're not gonna finish this no matter who pleads, but I'm gonna ask anyway. Please? Great story, I really like your writing style.

Stunning.

I'm a girl in the middle of an adjective crisis. I don't want to say that this was dark (I would say that it's UNFINISHED...!). Dark connotes a bit of negativity.

This was perfect. Loved the countdown. Love the fragmented sentences.

I'm glad you're promising to continue this, and I look forward to the update. This story is already shaping up nicely, and it's amazing just how good you are at this.

A little darker than I'm used to, but still as brilliant and insightful as is everything you write. Well done.

i kinda dont like it that Max died, but that first chapter was excellent, the 2nd, not so good. If you are going to finish it good.
Chlo

darn just when i started to like bobby you had to go and kill him off....oh well....i really enjoyed the way you created a new charctor...to bad he didn't live through it.....O=)

I don't know if anyone else was confused but I was and then I wasn't and then I was sort of thing, but the chapter was good so I'm looking forward to your next one.

That was so...I can't explain it but it was good I loved it. I glad thats not the end so im looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh, the angst! The darkness! The thwarted apathy! This was excellent; I loved it.

(I think it would be perfectly fine to end the story right here. But I trust you'll do well with the continuation--I'll be looking out for it.)

Hey! My first signed review.

Baloo - you know how much I love this. Your writing is as expressive and poetic as it gets.

The story itself is fantastic. Great twist on how POP could've been - well, if Max wasn't the star and all.