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| lilgurlgreen 2007-11-25 ch 2,  | abuseI read that you're not gonna finish this no matter who pleads, but I'm gonna ask anyway. Please? Great story, I really like your writing style. |
| wild wolf free17 2006-03-03 ch 2, | abuseStunning. |
| bk11 2004-06-17 ch 2, | abuseI'm a girl in the middle of an adjective crisis. I don't want to say that this was dark (I would say that it's UNFINISHED...!). Dark connotes a bit of negativity. This was perfect. Loved the countdown. Love the fragmented sentences. |
| Venus Smurf 2004-04-21 ch 2, | abuseI'm glad you're promising to continue this, and I look forward to the update. This story is already shaping up nicely, and it's amazing just how good you are at this. |
| Venus Smurf 2004-04-21 ch 1, | abuseA little darker than I'm used to, but still as brilliant and insightful as is everything you write. Well done. |
| fichic 2003-03-19 ch 2, | abusei kinda dont like it that Max died, but that first chapter was excellent, the 2nd, not so good. If you are going to finish it good. Chlo |
| skyeyes 2003-02-07 ch 2, anon. | abusedarn just when i started to like bobby you had to go and kill him off....oh well....i really enjoyed the way you created a new charctor...to bad he didn't live through it.....O=) |
| Ellashy 2003-02-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseI don't know if anyone else was confused but I was and then I wasn't and then I was sort of thing, but the chapter was good so I'm looking forward to your next one. |
| Ellashy 2003-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so...I can't explain it but it was good I loved it. I glad thats not the end so im looking forward to the next chapter. |
| PoohBah 2003-02-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, the angst! The darkness! The thwarted apathy! This was excellent; I loved it. (I think it would be perfectly fine to end the story right here. But I trust you'll do well with the continuation--I'll be looking out for it.) |
| Dreamer25 2003-02-02 ch 1, | abuseHey! My first signed review. Baloo - you know how much I love this. Your writing is as expressive and poetic as it gets. The story itself is fantastic. Great twist on how POP could've been - well, if Max wasn't the star and all. |