Reviews for We All Fall Down

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Wolfheart Dragonwing 2006-09-09 ch 3,	abuseInteresting...
GoldenFawkes 2005-05-16 ch 5,	abuseI'm stalking you; reading all your stories. And begging you to continue them! If Malfoy is so great when there's a kid around, then he's just gonna have to marry Ginny and have a kid! And THEN you can end the story. Meanwhile, where's this chapter that you were planning for a year and then disappeared for a year, aye? Please update! I really like this story!
dana6 2004-08-19 ch 5, anon.	abusethis is a really great story i like it! i hope the next chapter is comming soon, its rare to find good D/G fics these days, im glad i found yours! keep up the good work!
Tesserackt 2004-06-16 ch 5,	abuseI love it love it lovety LOVE it! Now. Post the next chapter. Now. ...Er...Please? =X
Erised 2004-05-26 ch 5,	abuseWow, this is bloody AWESOME so far. I suppose it might have something to do with timing (I was in the mood to read a post-hogwarts fic) but I don't think timing has anything to do with it. Just a few things I thought you should know (by chapter): Chapter 1: "revere" should be "reverie" absolutely brilliant phrase: "The candles placed in their bras..." Chapter 2: "scrapped" should be "scraped" "There had been times in his past when his mother had been able to predict things. Scrapped knees, falling out of trees, what the radio would say next." should be: "There had been times in his past when his mother had been able to predict things: scraped knees, falliong out of trees, what the radio would say next." Chapter 3: "revere" should be "reverie" (again) "hallow should be "hollow" "shutter" should be "shudder" Chapter 4: "role" should be "roll" Chapter 5: "Why would she refuse at act herself in front of her family..." should be "Why would she refuse to act like herself in front of her family..." or "Why would she refuse to be herself in front of her family..." I really like your style of writing. It's very rich without spelling everything out for the reader. Absolutely lovely. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Winnixy 2004-04-20 ch 5,	abuseomg this is so good! love the intense d/g action... waiting for more. big grin
Queen of Night 2004-04-14 ch 5,	abuseAWSOME!LOVE IT !
aurora borealis1 2004-04-02 ch 5,	abuseGya! runs around screaming Cliff-hanger! And then I mean by the tip of its fingers! Help! Help! Write more! I can't continue like this, waiting for the next chapter! WRITE! ahem Anyway, great chapter. So Harry's jealous, huh? tsk. And nothing to be jealous of... or maybe not. GRINZ I loved the D/G action, as you called it. I was also looking forward to reading how they'd deal with it, until you came with that awfully evil cliff-hanger and I can't help but run around screaming. Like I've written before already. Anyway, I also loved the Draco-Emaleen stuff in the beginning. He's so cute as a daddy-figure, especially because he gets so uncomfortable. :D Loved Molly's present. Very beautiful. Actually, I don't think there's anything I didn't like about this chapter. (Horrible that she had to predict Arthur's death, though.) So you know what to do, right? WRITE!
KeeperOfTheMoon 2004-04-01 ch 5,	abuseOoh, I love it! I shoulda guessed they would have kissed... I should have guessed! Anyway, wonderful chapter and I couldn't help but love teh D/G goodness!
Damia - Queen of the Gypsi'... 2004-03-28 ch 5,	abuseEvil Cliffy, not nice. cliffy's are never nice. Evil author person. Grr . . . do you have to write so well? It makes us common peoples yearn for the next chapter. Write more soon. - Damia -
sabacat 2004-03-26 ch 5,	abuseI LOVE this fic! It's so intense! ...definitely one of my favorites! Can't wait for the next chapter!
meena2 2004-03-26 ch 5, anon.	abusegreat chapter
Lallie 2004-03-25 ch 5,	abuseYes you did say you were writing it for yourself. Anyways I think university has done some good, you've gotten better. So yay. Lovely chapter, quite a bit happened and it was easy to picture in my head. Question though...why white? White just is so weddingish.
Averill 2004-03-23 ch 5,	abuseits really late, and im sorry this is short. but its really good. post soon
Queen of Night 2004-02-08 ch 4,	abuselove how the story is goin so far...can't wait 4 the next chappy

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