this is the first time i have ever written a review. but i just had to let you know, your story was brilliant. i've read a lot of stories on vegeta and bulma and i could never find a good story that was enough. Epic, was what i was looking for, it was long, and it had a general sense of their characters. it was a good read.

I wanted to say that when I first began reading B/V fics about seven years ago, this was one of the first multi-chapter fics that I stuck with. It was so intricately written that I couldn't tear myself away from it for more than a few hours. I fell in love with the way you wrote out the characters, especially Vegeta. I really appreciate you writing this and I hope that one day you may write one again. Thanks!

-Wolf

This is the best DBZ fic i've ever read! Zarbon was so cool in this fic its the onl DBZ fic i have found with Zarbon being a main character.

wow that was an amazing bit of literature there. your characters and scenes were so well defined and developed. thank you for the pleasurable read. I hope to find and read more of your work.

Truly a story of epic proportions! Nice job. o_O

A classic

Brilliant, a real masterpiece :)

nice one!! Like it alot!! Love reading your story!

aawesome!!

amazing chapter!! I can't stop reading o.O because it is so great haha!! Love it,!!

awesome!! love it!! original story.

wow, awesome.. Like it already ^U^ I'm excited to read to more

I have to say that this is one of the best DBZ stories i ever read and i happened upon it by total accident! amazing plot Gripping chapters and very well thought of. the epilog was fitting as well i really hope you bust out a sequil someday

*high pitched squeal of delight* This fic was totally awesome! What a brilliant story.

this has been the best vegeta fanfic i have ever read. it was worth it to read every word.