You have a good start. Great drama intro, but I'm a little confused. You don't mean the same Quinn, as NW The Chosen, do you? I need a little more to go by.
~Soraia~

I have a question. You said that Quinn wasnt your character, so is this the same Quinn from the Chosen, Rashel's soulmate? Or did you just take the same?

Ok. It looks like a good start, but you didn't give me much to go on. You might want to consider making this part a little longer or add another chapter quick.