that was nice

its sad but i can see how it works well keep writing your piece is great thanks for letting me read it

taka sohma

Neat story - told from an interesting perspective. Good Job.

Aww... poor Sei.

WHAT A NICE TEAR JERKER STORY SO TOUCHING. MAKES ME WANNA CRY BUT I DON'T LIKE SEI THAT MUCH HE WAS A BURDEN TO REI AFTER HE COMMITED SUICIDE! BUT IS STILL PRETTY GOOD. IT SOUNDS LIKE HE REGRETS EVERYTHING THAT HE DID TO REI AND SO ON. HE ALSO SOUND SO NICE AND GOOD BUT IN THE MANGA HE REALLY ISN'T.

You know I hardly get to read your stories, but always when I hear one from you its never bad. Now that you showed me some more of your work I wonder if I’ll get to see more in the near future. Like before June 18th of 2004 maybe?
-Zack

You know I hardly get to read your stories, but always when I hear one from you its never bad. Now that you showed me some more of your work I wonder if I’ll get to see more in the near future. Like before June 18th of 2004 maybe?
-Zack

*sniff* Oh my God. That is so good! And I love how you made it from Sei's point of veiw. It gave an outsider, yet insider's veiw on Rei and Kira's relationship. But at the same time it kept up with the idea of the manga story ("a dead body that looks like you") and kinda explained how Sei's would feel confused and guilty because of what he did. I love it. Keep up the Good Work! _

can't review much, crying to hard *reaches for the tissue box* very well writen *leaves to cry in peace*

Aw...wow...that touched me. Very beautiful, good job!

I actually had a few tears at the end of this! This is just such a...beautiful fanfiction. Hell, Mars is a beautiful manga. I never fail to shed a few tears during it. Arigatoo for the beautiful fiction, write more and soon!

Beautiful. Wow. That's all I can say. Sad, too. You really know how to make the readers get all choked up, which is a rare talent. You should feel blessed to possess it. Write another fic soon, I'll be sure to read it!

Momiji-chan

I will read this. . .someday. Since I've reviewed every other MARS story, I decided that even though I haven't read this, I would review it anyway. There is one thing that I would like to point out, though. The words are clumped together so that there's no distinguishing between paragraphs. This should probably be fixed. But, once I've read the entire series, I will come back to this fic and read and review for real. You can count on it (actually, I'll probably forget-but I'll try my best to remember).

hmm...what can I say? I though it was really great, and I thank you so very much for using my...our lyrics. They fit perfectly. The point of view you used was truly unique and wrote it well. I look forward to seeing more Mars fanfics from you...you're awesome! _