David Lewis 2007-01-23 . chapter 10 I am very glad to see you are updating again, as this is a very good story that I enjoy reading multiple times. You've managed to make a relatively cliche idea of a god of darkness into something very interesting. Please keep going. |
Jaryd Alderis 2007-01-13 . chapter 10I'm very suprised, that there is a new chapter for this story, I thought it was dead long ago, but I'm happy it isn't keep writing, a bit faster if possible. |
Lunatic Pandora1 2007-01-09 . chapter 10An interesting concept, but you need to work a bit on the descriptions and such. For instance I never quite understood why in the world he was trying to move the table there in the earlier chapter. Anyway, I'd like to see him visit his family (hey mom, look I'm a god!) or meet Marller or even better, my favorite character of them all, the Daimakaicho herself.. Hild! |
Vilkath 2007-01-09 . chapter 10So glad for an update.. just a few days ago I found this gem burried under years of other fanfics. Then suddenly an update! I hope this is a good sign you plan on updating this some more. Such an interesting story, and your newest chapter shows some real improvement in your writing skills. |
oneswordsworn 2007-01-08 . chapter 10First off, thank you very much for updating. It was great to see the story continue.
Overall, i like your story very much. You give a good amount of questions along with some unusual answers.
I look forward to reading more from you. |
Vilkath 2007-01-04 . chapter 9I'm not usualy a fan of self insertions, especialy in AMG, they tend to be weird wish fics. Still I am impressed by this fic, interesting in many ways, It's been a few years but I hope you update this eventualy. I have seen worse AMG fics using just the main characters, yet you managed to pull it off with a self insertion. |
oneswordsworn 2006-11-28 . chapter 1 Excellent story so far...I hope to see more come out eventually. |
mikebreslau 2005-11-23 . chapter 9Another "how I became a god" fantasy, this time with a Mexican-American flavoring. Interesting.
The author seems to be quite erudite, though he struggles (understandably) to express himself in his second language - which also contributes to the charm of the story. |
Nathen Long 2004-09-14 . chapter 9 The Dark God is a good story. Please update it. |
Nathen Long 2004-06-23 . chapter 1 Good story, please continue updating. |
Nathen Long 2004-06-03 . chapter 9 Great story, please continue updating |
Freaky Person O.o 2004-04-27 . chapter 9GOOD! Please update soon! I'll be waiting! |
huni 2004-04-10 . chapter 9 finnaly a new chapter! I do like this fic alot, the detail is refreshing for a fanfic. Please continue |
Nathen Long 2004-04-04 . chapter 5 The story "The Dark God" is very good, please continue the story. |
Nathen Long 2004-03-13 . chapter 8 The Dark God is a very good story. Please update it. |