Aww! That was soo cute! Is this the ending? I almost hope it won't be, but I'm not sure what you can do to improve on perfection of waffyness.

forxibaby: so this is Anime Critique here
forxibaby: and we're here to rate you're story
Dragonwindrider: yup
forxibaby: okay
forxibaby: so what did u think about the story 'Triangle'? Dragon
Dragonwindrider: haha i thought it was...interesting but kind of over done in the lemon area
forxibaby: Yea i though so to
Dragonwindrider: it kind of scared me in some parts like i mean, 3 lemons in one chapter
forxibaby: i mean how many lemons were there?
forxibaby: I can't count
Dragonwindrider: i dont personaly have anything big ageinst lemons, but that was kind of much
Dragonwindrider: even considering the plot
Dragonwindrider: but i loved all the jap phrases u used
forxibaby: yup
Dragonwindrider: like the im not right in my head
Dragonwindrider: or seomthing?
forxibaby: I feel like i'm not in my head
Dragonwindrider: that was awesome
Dragonwindrider: lol
Dragonwindrider: yeah that was it
forxibaby: lo
forxibaby: l
forxibaby: - i love that phrase
Dragonwindrider: me too
Dragonwindrider: im gonna put it in my aim info
Dragonwindrider: lol
forxibaby: So on a scale of 1-10 1 being the lowest 10 being the highest what would u rate it?
forxibaby: You know what really got me is that 3 people liking each other. -_- nothing against it but kinda werid.
Dragonwindrider: yeah
Dragonwindrider: um...ok, i thought it was funny, like i was seriously laughing my head off, but romance type things sometimes do that to me, *shrugs* dont kown y. um...but there were kind of too many lemons, but over all the whole thing was really well writen even tho sometimes the plot was kind of...weird. i give it a 7?
Dragonwindrider: maybe a 6
forxibaby: Idon't think i liked it very much even though the phrases were good i don't really like the plot and I really have something against haveing 3 lemons in a chapter although not all chapters have lemons. The story is detailed and the the characters are kinda out of place but other than that i would give it a 4.5-5

Oh! This ficcie is so good! _ NE, Jan?
Jan: ...yep...
Me: _very_ enthusiastic ( how do you spell it?) Isn't he? Eh heh heh.

Rowan: Go Bakura! You show Kaiba! Nobody calls your Yuugi a whore!

Sakura: And so Bakura gains another fangirl.

Rowan: If fathers are so special, where's Bakura's?

Sakura: Good question. On an archelogical dig?

Rowan: Probably...but where's Yuugi's jii-san? Is he dead or something?

Sakura: ...Don't ask me!

Rowan: And what about Kaiba's staff? Don't you think they'd have something to say about the teenager doing what he's doing with Yuugi?

Sakura: They don't want to get fired is all.

Rowan: Oh, makes sense.

Rowan: Kaiba and Yuugi have issues...the only sane, absolutely right-in-the-head-ones are Bakura and Jounouchi.

Sakura: I have to agree with you. Even Yami, letting Yuugi do what he does! *shudders*

Rowan: Not bad so far! Will continue reading, later...expect to hear from us!

Another excellent fic! I read this one before, but was too lazy to review. Love yer stuff!

very good, liek teh pauirings, you shdoul have less japanesse though, sicne this is int eh english section

Ok, i started this story a little before noon this morning, it is now officially 9:43 pm, I didn't know I had been reading this thing that long, in other words, I really enjoyed it and loved it just the same. Only thing that really caught my attention is that u really like the word melted a lot. It's used over 10 times in each chap, maybe more, still loved the story though, catch yah later.

The demon Rain

Well, I have to say it was a pretty good story. Kinda lost me a while back but I got it later. But I have a commetn to make... Yuugi-kun said "I love you" aishuteru to Bakura. Bakura said "I love you" to Yuugi, but never to Kaiba. I know he said his loved them both but he never said it directly to Kaiba. And Kiaba didn't say it to him either. Maybe I missed it but I did notice the lack of "I love you"'s. But it was still a good story.

- that was a cute ficcy.I loved it :) and it was definatly a different type of paring/threesome ._. I didn't think I'd actually like a Bakura/Yugi/Kaiba paring but this one was real well written _ great job!

This was really awesome! It deserves more praise than that, but i dont know what else to say... Its very good!

hihi!

ooh. . .it seems to be turning bakuracentric. . .i luvbakura, but i think i'm addicted to seto 'n' yugi. . .MORE YUGI AND SETO PLEZ

Nywayz, i luv ur ficcy anyway!

i would go review all the other chappies if i had time but. . .homework beckons. . .u.u

pretend you have 20 more reviews_ (i dunno if ur the type of people to care about reviews but. . .ok now i'm rambling. ill be quiet now.)

write and update! w/u! _

Is the entire internet peverse? Gaah! The thought that you breathed air that I might have breathed makes me sick to my stomach!(sorry for misspellings)

yeah! you had udapted!

will ryou really stay with his father? what seto and yugi will do? and what hapening at malik?

hope you udapte soon