EK! GREAT GREAT GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!

*falls to her knees and bows* GREAT FIC!

I only wish it was longer with more romance btwn malcolm and hoshi.

A truly well-written fic. Enjoyed myself from beginning to end!

This is just great. Wow. It's not often that a story will leave me speechless, but this one did. You wrote this story with so much excellence, it's just amazing. Everything about it is amazing. Wonderful, wonderful work.

Absolutely magnificent. Bravo!

That's all I can say. It's too brilliant for words.

-Chibi-Kaz

Wow, just WOW! I truely loved this story. You have a wonderful way with words. I liked how you shifted from Malcolm to "Arthur"!

Beautiful story, wonderful ending. I try very hard not to ask this question, but ... Any chance of a sequel? Or maybe just more of how the relationship would work out? *shrugs* I love the pairing. But still, wonderfully told story.

I had an insidious little feling that Trip would somehow be identified with Lancelot (so fits). This is a wonderful story!

Fascinating. The two memories thing is really cool and interesting. I like this story a lot.

Is Malcolm becoming Arthur? Hmmm... This story is really interesting. And the detail (like with the dress) is neat too.

Brilliant idea! Malcolm and Hoshi in Camelot! He should be right at home. But I wonder about her ... Beautifully written too, so far. Off to read more ...

Wow. That is GOOD. Self-awareness and sap in one. Keep it up!

I stand in awe. That was absolutely wonderful. The story flowed well, the characters were beautiful...I loved it. Your anaylses of King Arthur and Malcolm were right on the mark. Something has always bothered me about the Arthur legends; I didn't put my finger on it until I read your story...he's a faceless legend. Again, brilliant. Please keep writing.

Absolutely beautiful tale. I was mesmerized from the very first paragraph to the very end. I loved seeing a romantic Malcolm - he has so much potential in that area. Wow! Great! Fabulous! Thanks!

Liked how you made LancelotTrip. Very moving chapter. I am interested in how this will end.

Wow! I love how you are writting this. I can hear the change in their tones when they are swtiching personalities - great dialogue. You should be really proud of your talent!