 KenRik 10/17/11 . chapter 1I love the story. I love the exchange. I love the subconscious' answers. I love it. It fits perfectly. Beautiful! |
 Omnicat 3/5/08 . chapter 1Wow. I'm impressed. If I didn't know you wrote "Building a Princess" too, I'd be surprised at how good this is. :) |
 Nelja 6/5/05 . chapter 1The arguments are very interesting ansd poetically said. It's a nice fic (and I love the pairing, which spoils nothing). But it's strange to me to see an internal argument presented like dialog, the two persons aren't close enough about how I imagine an internal conflict, the transitions are brutal, it seems also like it's a case of schizophrenia and it seems strange.
But it's just about he form! The content of the fic is still good! |
 Sandry 7/3/04 . chapter 1 LOVE IT. LOVEITLOVEITLOVEIT.
Really incharacter. |
 Tonna Yuy 1/2/02 . chapter 1I really liked it! |
 Death Fairy 9/26/01 . chapter 1This is another great piece by you. Instead of "admitting" or "releasing" his feelings, he's arguing about them. You've expressed the conversation between his head and his heart beautifully. I myself have tried GW fanfiction many times, so I know how hard it is to take the characters and do something useful with them. Good job, as usual. _ |
 Nin 5/6/01 . chapter 1 That was REALLY good! Better than mine...lol. I want to know if I can post your fics in my archive! All of 'em! That would be so cool! n_n |
 fadedLily 4/20/01 . chapter 1thats kinda cute... however i think Relena bashing is funnier. |
 Shini 3/16/01 . chapter 1ooooooo! Good without being overly sappy, wow how *do* you do it? |
 Taboo 12/12/00 . chapter 1Really, really amazing. I'm in deep envy. Don't worry, it takes forever for me to write,too. I hope to see more from you soon |
 Horuri 12/6/00 . chapter 1OOOOOOO! AAAAAAA! I'm in awe. That was sooooo good! It's going on my favorites too! |
 Lanen 12/5/00 . chapter 1AHHHH! SUGOI! That was remarkable! Like the Relena ficcy! Wai wai! |
 KSJ 12/3/00 . chapter 1Hey,that was really good! I figured it was about time I got off my lazy butt and read some of your work - I am really honored and appreciative of the time and energy you have put into r&ring mine! I really liked the inner conflict in this one. I think you really got Heero's mind down solid. Keep writing! |
 Relena Yuy Lowe 11/30/00 . chapter 1 Beautifully written! I hope you write more. This wasn't overly sappy (although I enjoy sap), but he wasn't overly cruel either. Keep up the GREAT work. |
 Take a guess 11/29/00 . chapter 1 Interesting |