Hisuka: Wheez!

Hisuka: Whee!! Lub it! Update pwease, and bring So-chan in, too!
Sojiro: .. -sweatdrop-

anata wa kawaii desu! please finish this one too. hehehe

ahg! This is wonderful!! WAI WAI! What happens next? oh man please don't leave it like that! Update whenever you can but DAH!

Okay. Now I like it even more than before. Even though it's only the beginning of your story, I can tell that it will have a lot of depth to it and I am sure that it will be well written.

Please update this as soon as you get the time!

Wow. I liked it. A lot.

hey dont you see we all like your fics, they r fabulous. u r to good at this. ur write up pulls our eyes and mind into it. and even after so many review that we give u asking u to update them u dont. what is it r u angry with us or something. or u dont feel bad for us at all. i hope u will read this review. i even wonder whether u read ur reviews or not.
anyway bye for now.
i might come back later.

OMG! CONTINUE!PLEASE! WHERE'S SOUJIRO?

This is definitely one of the more intriguing stories out there (hint hint: update!)
I like the way how it's so AU and yet the characters still manage to stay true to themselves. The plot is intriguing and fresh, as well...

i read a few of the reviews left for this fic and now I'm going to do a bit of begging.

DON'T MAKE ANY AOSHI/MISAO IN THIS ONEGAI SHIMASU! I'm sorry all you cannon ao/mi fans but I'm so sick of it. Soujiro and Misao is my favourite pairing and heck, enishi and misao are okay sano and mi even but i'm so tired of aoshi. go let him hook up with tomoe. those two seem to be made for each other. hrmph *folds arms and tosses head to the side* Heck, grab okita in here and make him another of Misao's pairings. ^^;

gomen, i'll hush now, i just like when you do different pairings you do them so well. Yes, your cannons are also superb but I think that this fic does not call for Aoshi and Misao to get together.

*bows again, waiting for Midori-sempai to hit her for being such a snitch, seeks refuge behind Kuroiyousei) >.

Ahh! Midori-sempai! I would have read this a lot sooner had I known there would be Sou/Misao in it. (that's no excuse, I know) Anyhow I do hope you get lots of inspiration on this fic, good luck with your writings. You truly are brilliant.

*bows*
Phoe-chan

Whew! Can't wait for Sou's POV part. I'm not going to ask abt Aoshi anymore since you didn't put that in the pairings.looking forward to the remaining deadly sins (the thought just popped into my head when I read the titles of your chapters).

wah your an excellent writer XD good start.. Soujirou! Gotta meet him soon.. hes awsome =)

Wow.Oh.My.God. --> Well, that was my reaction once I finished reading the two chapters.
You know, quite a few authors mentioned you from time to time and I decided to look for one of your fanfictions to see what it was all about. I was amazed, I find your story very interesting and original.
Well, not too much time to review, sorry.
Keep writing!
Chuicks!
-Luli451

This fic is truly amazing! The rich prose; sensitive writing; sensuous, provocative style; vivid characterization and bold, sinful plot make the story such a compelling read! Excellent work!I really look forward to your next update and I can't wait to see how your story progresses!