This was great, I liked seeing Remus fight the wolf

Aah, interesting .

I haven't read the slash version yet though, so I think I will go do that now .

:3

Very interesting story. I read both this version and the slash version. Both read well, and it's hard to choose between them (and I have no particular preference for het vs. slash). The theme of the inner wolf comes through strongly in both. In this version, it's a relative stranger (an unusually perceptive one) who sees it, and what she sees is the wolf. In the other version, Sirius sees it, and he sees... the wolf, who's his friend, who has in him the same wildness we all do.

As for the motorbike (one of the coolest gadgets in the HP series), love the back-story. My own version of this involves Ted Tonks... because someone had to have corrupted Sirius the insular pureblood. But I like this version too, a lot.

I loved this piece. You had great pace and style, and your descriptions were extraordinary while the dialogue was also great. You did really well with showing the accents.

Honestly, I can't seem to find anything wrong with this piece, but I have to say I was really happy with the ending. I think it did a really great job of explaining why Remus was afraid of a relationship with Tonks in the books. Great job. :)

Aw sweet and slightly dark. Very intersting! I enjoyed muchly!

Must I really choose one or the other version as the best? I liked the scene breaks in this version. And I loved the exploration of the wolf here. I believe there is much more to being a werewolf than JK Rowling explored in her novels and this brings some very intresting thoughts to mind. On the other hand, since I think these two wizards need one another, the other version has certain aspects that this one lacks!

That was very interesting, surprisingly well written. I say surprising, because the summary led me to believe it would be ver different. I think I'll look into some of your other fics.

This was awesome!

I loved the story! The motorcycle sounded beautiful, I must have it!

I did not expect Remus to transform at that moment at all. Quite a nice surprise though. I enjoyed how you portrayed their friendship.

Chandra Chhaya

PS Please R&R my first fanfiction too if you get the chance.

*chuckles* I never imagined Sirius's motorcycle could be made into the center of a short story. This was very good. It carried a nice message.

Aw. good story.

Cool! I thought it was awesome, a brave and excellent plunge into the world of teenage hormones every writer wants to pass through(or at least I always do, lol), plus you brought in emotions and inner conflicts and humor too!
Very...Great! lol
P.S. I hope this doesn't sound too, um...un-personalized, but its because I've been giving really personal reviews to strangers all day, lol.

Good. Keep writing! You have talent!

This is a very good, well written story. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff. :)

Wow this is very well written. Most people on ff.net don't have such a creative way of expresing things. Like the way describe light. It's really great. You even did a great job on their characters. I am deeply impressed