 Imzadi 2/6/03 . chapter 1First of all, this story included Lindsey, so how can I not like it. I think the plot is original, although you could use a beta for help with sentence structure and grammar in places. I hadn't thought of Lilah as a lesbian given her activity with Wes and her repeated attempts to seduce Angel (and, I think, something of a crush on Lindsey), but there was a hint of it with Bethany Chalk in Untouched, so it does work. I am looking forward to more, but with "finis" at the end maybe I won't get my wish. Anyway, a very nice story. |