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Reviews for: Window of Innocence
minako366 5/20/09 . chapter 1
woo, kind of liking to was this was going *nods* should be another installment though it;s a great idea
MiniShrink 4/2/07 . chapter 1
I really, really REALLY like this story, and am also quite in love with the idea of Lilah being Tara's first.
Darklight 2/6/03 . chapter 1
so that was the how Tara ended up in SD acording to your fic, I like it.
Kat 2/6/03 . chapter 1
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Imzadi 2/6/03 . chapter 1
First of all, this story included Lindsey, so how can I not like it. I think the plot is original, although you could use a beta for help with sentence structure and grammar in places. I hadn't thought of Lilah as a lesbian given her activity with Wes and her repeated attempts to seduce Angel (and, I think, something of a crush on Lindsey), but there was a hint of it with Bethany Chalk in Untouched, so it does work. I am looking forward to more, but with "finis" at the end maybe I won't get my wish. Anyway, a very nice story.
Tariq 2/6/03 . chapter 1
Hi. NICE! PLZ CONTINUE!
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