to be blatantly honest I am british and I love the harry potter books but I think you need to avoid using the same language over and over for characters. I've read two of your stories and noticed you write "rolled her eyes/rolled his eyes" a few times in your first story and also the things dumbledore says are repetitive and being British we do not refer to our country as Great Britain at all and not to be snide but the brits in general tend to dislike anything American and I noticed there are quite a few references to America (which obviously with you being American you can't help).Good try though although I can see where you've taken the exact storyline of Goblet of Fire and tweaked it to fit your new idea (which is very similar).

i wanna see sirius and remus kicking snape's **! that is all! great fic so far! ^_^

Team 1
Harry, Draco, Ron, Crabbe, Hagrid, Mcgonagall, Fred and George, and Hermione.

Team 2
Lavender, Snape, Neville, Seamus, Dean, Pansy, Justin Finch-Fletchy(whatever)Ginny and Peeves.

For a nice twist in the story, think about leaving Harry at school and have Ron and/or Hermione go. A place recommendation is the middle of the Sahara Desert in northern Africa.

An interesting idea but if you are going to use swear words the fic needs to have a higher rating than G. Please be courteous to your readers and don't give it a lower rating than the content merits. This needs to be PG.

Grin, Fred and George would bring some humor into the situation, for sure, and they're creative which can come in handy. Other than that definitely Snape, Harry/Hermione/Ron of course, Sirius and/or Remus (just 'cause Snape can't stand them ::evil grin::). Draco 'cause Harry can't stand him.

I like the idea ALOT! Lets see now. Obviously Snape to go in (potions). Hermione (smarts), Ron (tenacity), Harry (for whatever reason you can come up with),McNair & Hagrid (huntsmen), Dobby &/or Mrs Weasley(cook) Remus & Serius (oh they're just frick & frack - got to get them in - Although the survivor series better not take more than a month or they'll all be dinner! and Lupin would be named the ultimate survivor by default!) Draco - sans Crabbe & Goyle, along with his father Lucius. (Have Wormtail show up and they end up eating him... ewwww) Unamed wizard that turns out to be Voldermort.

Need more girls... Lavender Brown, Padma(not Pavarti)Patil, Pansy Parkinson, Cho Chang,we need Fleur Delacour's sister Gabrielle, & Madame Maxine.

That's who I'd like to see. Anywhoo - good luck I am looking forward to reading the rest of your story.