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Trevmon
2009-11-20 . chapter 1
Yeah... Crow DIED in the last book. My question is why and how is he alive?
anonymous
2009-10-03 . chapter 15
this is a cool story. but i think time travel is a little confusing. If tal time travelled himself back to when jade was about to die, wouldn't there have been two tals? and then even if Virus had killed the Jade now Tal and Milla woulda remembered and when they met him in the futeure they couldve killed him. but then the events of the past wouldve been erased...so then they wouldnt remember anyway...but even when jade said if she went back to the future her father wouldve flipped because she risked her life...but shoulnt he have remembered since she had changed the past? see? confusing! anyway this is AWESOME :D
Bane-Treller
2008-11-03 . chapter 15
Where is it? Where is the sequel. I want to read it. I love your story.
Kar-zid
2007-12-01 . chapter 15
Great Story! I love this! I can't wait until you write the sequel. This is going on my favorites!
Naruto Ninja44
2007-07-01 . chapter 15
WERE R U!
U bettah not b dead!
This waz 2 good!
C'mon!
I luv this!
Plz, we need teh sequel!
...
I guess ur like most of them...
the authors who say things,
but dont do them...
watever,
I hate authors who dont continue wat the started,
or make the promised sequel.
See ya later.>3
~Nicole
Zeno0010
2006-10-14 . chapter 3
one thing watch the language in the nexed one
Zeno0010
2006-10-14 . chapter 1
FINALLY someone knows how i feel i like the story
blank
2006-08-16 . chapter 15
WHERE IS THE SEQUEL ITS BEEN YEARS PLEASE REVIEW SOON
lizzie
2006-05-02 . chapter 15
when s daughter of destiny 2 coming i ve been waiting
Lucifer's reincarnation
2006-03-04 . chapter 15
very good.
loki lee
2006-01-17 . chapter 15
i like it i kinda perfer malenandcrow but this was good
Zephyr
2005-11-20 . chapter 15
You did such a wicked job on this story--I am so looking foward to that sequel...if you'll ever make it...It's been almost a year but anyway...

The part where Jade firsts meets Tal--Tal takes great notice that she looks exactly like Milla, aside from her eye color. When he asks her who her mother is she's all like 'I cant say because then I might not br born' or something like that.

...Wouldn't he already -know- that Milla was Jade's mother? Why else would they look so identical? Its common sense unless he has none, LOL!
Miss Touched In The Head
2005-10-27 . chapter 1
that was so great.ST rawks.your fanfic rawks too.^^write more pls.
mystic angel of the tarit
2005-07-25 . chapter 1
great story! though if Jane grew up on the ice she would have more guts in the biggining
SwordOfTheJedi
2005-07-11 . chapter 15
GENIUS!
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