Absolutely lovely. Your words show elegant talent with imagery. Your desciption was quite excellent, and the symbolism was... abundant? Even though I am not a fan of symbolism, I believe you did more than an excellent job with this piece.

I am very much impressed by your talents, and I shall hope to read more of your work soon.

This MIDI is lovely. _ *Is going to continue listening until it is burnt into the skull*

::Sniffles pathetically:: How sad. I'm actually listening to the song as I'm writing this. It fits so well. I really liked this ficclet and I like your writing style very much. Keep up the good work.

Very beautiful beginning. Descriptivy (is that a word?) and such. I'd like to see how this turns. Ran angst is good. It's about time we have some Ran angst here. Anyway, keep it

Lovely! Keep on writing, and I'll keep on reading!

It's not corny at all! It's really nice! I loved how the sun and the clouds heard only music and saw only beauty because they weren't listening and looking hard enough. It's very poetic. I also like the image of Aya-kun playing the piano, and playing the piano while /crying/ is a very sad but beautiful image.

Anou... O.o ...

... ;_; ...

O.k., I'm glad you feel better ...Maybe you can even feel better-better by listening to Gackt...? His lyrics are very...sweet, dreamy..hopeful... And he's a master at the piano. I'll check out that link to the midi song, too.

Your writing...is still pretty... beautiful imagery. It's not corny. But we like corn chips - especially the seasoned kind. .

This's is really sweet and romantic with the poetic side luv it :)

and the title is sweet too i think -

Awww...'tis so sad! But at least you're feeling better! Try and stay like that! *glomps* I'm not in the greatest of moods right now, which is why chapter 5 of WYWO isn't out yet...sorry about that! *sweatdrops* I have a feeling it's going to take an angsty turn until I'm more cheered up. But as I said, this fic was wooooonderful. Just sad. Thanks a million, dude.

O_O THAT was corny? Nooooooo! *huggles* that was amazing and I really felt touched reading that. You can write emotions so... so... well, *points at ficcy* like THAT. It was amazing and I enjoyed it. Those must be some feelings you have if that's from personal experiences *huggles*

The midi was lovely too, but when I first read it, I was listening to the piano version of 'For Real' from Gensomaden Saiyuki. And the crest of the song happened right along the end and it was oh-so-pretty. Look for me on AIM (kamibukurosama) and I'll send the mp3 if you want

(wow, that was long _)

*gives you pocky and huggles* sugoi! write more!

ja ne!

kami-chan

SNIFF! *sobs quietl* so sad!

The fic wasn't horrible! It was sweet... Well sorry but this won't be a lengthy review... ;; But I thought it was a great story!

*glomps you* That was beautiful! I loved it so much, and it was so sad but so very beautiful. Great job! *cuddles*

*THAT* was horrible? *gasps* ... I think it's really pretty... I dunno, the imagery and such, I just love it.

if that was horrible, I'd like to see your great ones ;)