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| Silver Mayflower 2008-07-22 ch 2,  | abuseWouldn't it make sense for Nemesis to go through the flap that the Dursleys installed to bring Harry extra food? If a plate with food can fit through it, so can a snake. Cool stories though. I don't know anything about Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha or Mai HiME, but I loved your Detective Conan fic, and the Snake Who Lived series as well (which I'm reading right now, of course). |
| fred2008 2008-07-18 ch 27, | abuseas good as this is, the snake-who-lived series stopped on chapter 6 in book three. but i still need to read the next one. so i'll let you know then if its worth putting on alert or not. but good work if you ask me, sure some small problems but hey, no one is a perfect author. |
| dimriver 2008-05-02 ch 27, | abuseNice story, excellent English. |
| Shimo Ino 2007-10-11 ch 16, | abuseThis is so cool!! i'll be sure to read the first year too! |
| Arothas 2007-09-12 ch 27, | abuseAs good as the last one if not better:D Now some of the mistakes i noticed: As I'm from Austria I speak german (didn't think it would help me with fanfics^^). About the "Geisttötend Zauber"... the right form of this would be "Geisttötender Zauber". Now there's just that, that I think it sounds weird... You used the name of the spell as the incantation. That's like you'd use "cutting curse" as the incantation (instead of "Diffindo"). But that's just my opinion:D Second 'bout the hospital in Bulgaria... The name of the hospital is in german but bulgaria has it's own language. *starts reading the next one*^^ |
| Dishonorable 2007-07-06 ch 27, | abuseInteresting twist with the Lexicon... |
| Dragonist 2007-06-20 ch 27, | abuseWow, this is a great story, I absolutely love it. Awesome job on it, this has to be the coolest Slyth-Harry story here. I can't wait to read the sequel! |
| Nicol 2006-05-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseI HOPE with all my heart that Harry make Dobby into a soup and gives it to the toilet to drink. I hope thay he will get vengance and not "it ok you poor poor thing , i love and forgive you". If it was me , i'd get a knife or poison and get to work at thje very least I'd let it hurt itself as much as it wants. |
| Christie-Elise22695 2006-05-17 ch 14, | abuseHonored Guests Got Cursed,Panda Girl and Pig? Probably Genma And Ranma Saotome and Ryouga Hibiki isn't it? |
| shadow 2006-05-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis story is turning out to be better then the first Harry Potter story.I only wish Harry beat up dobby, dobby is a loser. |
| Twin Tails Speed 2006-05-03 ch 27, | abuseThis is a very good story and just as good as the first one. |
| SonokoTao 2006-02-26 ch 26, | abuseAh. Teletubys *shuder* and "The magical , Pritty Sammy!" |
| SonokoTao 2006-02-26 ch 21, | abuseYes Tom... Be afraid. Be VERY afraid! MWHAHAHAHA! |
| SonokoTao 2006-02-26 ch 19, | abuseAh. Monty Phython and the Holy Grail. FEAR THE BUNNY! You must use the Holy Hand-Granade! |
| SonokoTao 2006-02-26 ch 16, | abuse*smirk*very clever Daniel Radclif/Harry Potter Rupert Grant/Ron Weasley Emma/Hermione Granger |