everything written + described well, I like the lexicon book Harry has very neat

written well this here is

very newt this here is

It seem odd but i actually like draco this way. Your story is awesome so far!:)

good story, keep up the good work

this story is getting really good

good, keep it up

Heads up, in case you do not know, the english version of the quote from book 2 is relating to a bookshop or a bookstore not a library.

Well, I never. Ranma 1/2 + Harry Potter + Peeves + Instant Jusenkyo Springs. Why didn't I think of it before? Nice Inuyasha reference by the way.

This is probably the most entertaining and humorous fic I have ever read. Nice sense of humor.

I'm gonna continue reading and see how this turns out.

u should ask j k rowling if u could make your story a real book... its great...

hey... yay next year^^
just read your first book yesterday...

geisttötend zauber is in english actually spirit-killing spell
for saying soul-destroying spell its seelenzerstörungszauber
in german you write all words in one go if create like a new one...

glad if i helped you;)

btw i like this one as much as the first book

I thought this was a cool idea and thanks for writing.

Wouldn't it make sense for Nemesis to go through the flap that the Dursleys installed to bring Harry extra food? If a plate with food can fit through it, so can a snake.

Cool stories though. I don't know anything about Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha or Mai HiME, but I loved your Detective Conan fic, and the Snake Who Lived series as well (which I'm reading right now, of course).

as good as this is, the snake-who-lived series stopped on chapter 6 in book three. but i still need to read the next one. so i'll let you know then if its worth putting on alert or not. but good work if you ask me, sure some small problems but hey, no one is a perfect author.

Nice story, excellent English.