 Flamingsora 2008-07-23 . chapter 55this story is so awesome... please update soon. sorry that i haven't reviewed for a long time.. kay? tootles!@! |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 55poor parallel mickey hope it works out for him |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 51you are locking sora or someone else inside the door to light oh well knowing sora and his friends he or whoever it is will be alright |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 50that was just mean to Iraki making her and everyone else think thatKiru was dead then having another white keyblade master save him just mean oh well |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 48should i throw a party that sora has two keyblades again or should i just be waiting for Aros to take it back again?
what i can't hear you oh well. |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 45you know i just noticed something you really like having the gaurds
be humanoid animals don't you first cats and dogs and now
rabbits?
frogs?
oh well it is interesting |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 42i agree i also hate Aros why did you make him... oh yeah stories are a bit boring without bad guys and plots |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 41yes Sora has two key.blades Sora has two key.blades happy dance throws party gives away all possessions and house wait what whoops takes back all possessions and house that i don't own.
nice chapter. |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 40nice interaction between Riku and Aros i just hope that Sora can recover in time |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 39yay i was right and sorry about doing reviews that are pretty much useless but i like to comment |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 38still a good story i am interested at what will happen to Aros eventually will Ansem sod (seeker of darkness) posses him like he did Riku |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 36yes i know that this is not criticisms or complement but let me guess ansem seeker of darkness? |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 35still a good story and you did get me i thought that his heart was in or around iraki not the oathkeeper charm |
 halestone48 2008-01-21 . chapter 34i like this story nice work maybe a few less cliffhangers... please ok i am joking.
i really like the idea of four keyblades some authors have had hundreds before but that fits this story.
i did not see aros's betrayal coming but where Soras heart was was just a bit obvious.
dont stop writing. |
 Taeniaea 2008-01-04 . chapter 55Great Story!! |