Good joB! Loved it_

well done...i guessed it was Gohan from the "And no one knows where, nor will they search" line...the whole poem goes well with Gohan's attitude (in your other stories) about how he believes it was his fault that Goku died... ::sighs:: poor Gohan... ;-; ...anyway, i give it an A! .

GOOD WORK, ONCE AGAIN!

That was really good. The poem really suits other people then Gohan. It seems to suit every fighter that dies on the battle field to save the ones he or she loves. You dont see that offten, and a person who can write it so that it touches a soul is rare. Oh great here I go on another one of my ramblings on good writing! Any way, if you havent guessed I LOVED IT!

This is so sad! Your usage of the language was beautiful. *puff* I wish I could write like you.

That was really good! I liked it alot. You should make more like these.

I love it. It's so simple, sad and elegent. I like how you seemed to capture that moment like I thought it would be. Alone and dying knowing that you tried and lost, everyone thinnking you're dead. Maybe you can make another one showing how Gohan felt going through that thing where his inner power is awakened and not having it do anything except make Buu stronger.

That was so sad... yet so honest at the same time.

I can't believe that you can write something like this in such a short time as a boring fourth period... usually I sometimes get ideas, but that's pretty much it!

Beautiful poem, Candyland.

Ja ne!

*Pearlz*

I knew the fic was about Gohan, but I figured it was taking place after Gohan had returned. Oh well. I like this. You've got talent.

Breathtaking. Is it just me, or does there seem to be an unusual amount of quality writers today?

Breathtaking. Is it just me, or does there seem to be an unusual amount of quality writers today?

NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO !

If this is the kind of thing you write while you're bored in 4th hour, I hope it STAYS boring! _ I got chill bumps! I kinda figured it was Gohan, but I thought it coulda been Vegeta on Namek for a second, and the trees and everything coulda been metaphorical... just a thought.

Wow! I'm impressed (as i am with all your writing) . You're such a good writer, i can never get enough of it! I think it's really pretty and very deep: it's good. Now, i /could/ go through and analyze every little bit for you, and i'm seriously considering it cause i'm so damnably bored, but probably not... I'll just leave it at "that was a really really good poem".

Lexi

Wow... nice analogy.