sweet story!

Props to you. You have a very interesting, original story and idea here. I'm deeply impressed by it's entirety although one thing bugs me. Penn was going to take over everything, and he stops at the moment Rika promises herself to him...I may not be getting the idea yet I suppose.

nice work i read all of this story but lost the page n just fwond it agin do more

I'm as speechless as the first/last time I read this, damn you. I'm just... blown away by the sheer dramatic effects of your dialogue (especially "If you loved Ryo Akiyama, prove it or die!"), plotline, and writing skills. I especially liked the programming-ish way Penn and Rika communicated at the end, but that just might be my computer geek tendencies coming out. ^_^;;

And I'm -still- waiting for that sequel you promise in the summary. And I think I'll join Carter in waiting for Penn's head on a plate. =)

Wow. Absolutely mind-blowing. I didn't like the RyoxRika bits (I'm a TakatoxRika fan myself), but otherwise I'd have to say that this is one of the very best fics I've read in all my time at Fanfiction.Net. You've done it again, Seth. Another masterpiece.

I am glad you put this back up.

No! I refuse to re-review this! *Belches loudly and runs off*

Good, now I've finally got the last 3 chapter downloaded.

Looking forward to Book II.

Good story but I still don't like the ending. No offense but you need to put up the other one like you promised. You said you'd bring Penn's head back on a plate for me, right? ^_^ Anyway, keep writing. I look forward to your new stuff.