Hi,

I REALLY WANT YOU TO CONTINUE THIS STORY BECAUSI I REALLY LOVE IT! I WILL WAIT YOU FOR FOREVER IF I HAVE TO. EMAIL ME ABOUT YOU WILL CONTINUE IT OR NOT AND PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! I'M BEGGING YOU PLEASE! AT LEAST YOU MUST WRITE ABOUT VAN AND HITOMI'S HAPPY ENDING! REMEMBER! I WILL WAIT FOR YOU!

BEGGING,

Windy Emerald

i know ur not updating lately, but i just read the 1st chapter and :"( so sad. :"( sniff
i alway want hitomi with van. :"(

*glare* damn aurelia to hell...aww i feel so sorry for hitomi!! omg van is such a friggin backstabber!! this story is so depressing...

I've just reread this story and it's still so amazing as after the first time;D I do love your writing-style and your ideas! And I would like to read all your stories to a "happy end";) Will you - please, please, please, please, PLEASE - update any time soon?!

I LOVE/HATE THIS STORY! I HATE AURELIA! SHE CAN BURN! >_< POOR POOR HITOMI! HOW CAN YOU PUT HER THROUGH SOO MUCH MISERY AND PAIN! AND VAN! IM ASHAMED OF HIM! HOW CRUEL! EER! IM SO FRUSTRATED WITH THIS STORY! YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MANY TIMES IVE WANTED TO CRY OF FRUSTRATION WHILE READING THIS STORY! YOU HAVE A LOT OF EXPLAINING TO DO MISSY! AN THE ONLY WAY I'LL FORGIVE YOU IS IF YOU UPDATE! by the way, happy belated birthday. i read your bio and saw that your birthday is august 28. that's my brothers birthay. anyway... are you still alive? you haven't updated any of your stories in a while. you've got alot of disappointed fans out there... including me. anyway... i hope you update sometime in my lifetime cause i would really like to see how all your wonderful stories end... ^_~ have a good day.

Oh, you had to leave it there! I feel so bad for Hitomi! I actually felt really sad for her! Please update this soon. I hope you haven't lost the drive to continue because it's really good and it's original! so update soon!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Just read this story of yours (great just like all your stories!!). And going through your bio I suddenly stopped and thought that it's the 28th today. What a coincidence.
But really, this fic is so ... good (am at loss for words ^_^). How mean of Van to be so cruel to Hitomi. And how could you let Merle's love die. I can't quite decide who's meaner: you or Van ^_^. But are you going to update this? It's been quite a while. (And what about your other fics? *begs and keeps her fingers crossed*). Well, goodbye for now. Hope you have a lovely day!

very original story - Van in love with another woman and Hitomi so lonely.. This is a kind of story which shouldn't end with "happy end" for V&H, but your the writter!:) I really love it, please continue!

nice story! pls. continue it. well i want van to feel real guilty for his actions. i want him to feel that he made a bad decision on choosing aurelia, um thats just my opinion hehehe!

Ah!

I love your story!

Ha ha ha good for Hitomi that she pulled away from their kiss because I want Van to experience the pain he caused to Hitomi.

Please include another guy in this story that will fall for Hitomi so Van will snap out of his senses and realize how much he love her. I want Van to suffer first so that he will pay the pain he had caused to her.

But let me clear this, I DON’T HATE VAN. In fact, I LOVE VAN. I just want this story to be fair especially on Hitomi because she is the one who always suffers.

Keep writing! ^_^

this is an awesome story..i am in love with it. i hope you update even though it seems like you wont...but please please do!

YAY! I haven't been on in forever, so I'm just gonna cheer and say, "job well done!" I almost felt bad for Van there in the end when Hitomi didn't allow the kiss, but, really, it's all his fault, anyway. >P So there, Van.
I really like the romance and everything, very good, and that one visual "could smell the crimson" or something like that was really neat, because I never really thought of colors having scents. Really cool.
So, anyway, I really like your story and could you please hurry with the next chappie whenever you have the time? Please?

yay update soon!

Da-me yo! How can you do that?!?!?! They were so close to kissing! I can't wait til the nect chapter! I really hope you will continue this! It's an awesome story! Good luck! V/H FOREVER!

I think you're such a talented writer if you are able to make me feel so much emotion while reading this. So far I've felt compassion, anger and fear for each of the characters in this story.
They all seem so real and your dialogue is great.
continue!