How about adding Angela into the plotline?

Nice. Short, but still nice. Continue on it. ^_^

Cute. I like the use of flashbacks and stuff. Seems cute and light-hearted. Update! I`m relaly liking it.

I like your chacrterizations. Pretty realistic.

Aw ... Carlie`s just so cute. I think that Kevin and Carlie were such good friends, I love to see them communicating wtih each other. Few people explore their relationship in antyhing other than a romance. I can`t wait to see more, (I review chapter by chapter) this is very nice!

I'd never played SOM2 (Didn;t know they had a sequel) Only the original SOM and LOM (Legend of Mana) Pretty neat so far!!

wow! sounds like something out of a fantasy book...its good keep writing! And thanks for reviewing me! I added u to my fav. author list!

Hehehe, nice start ^_^ Whacky, but that's not bad at all, just fun. I hope you'll contunue this!

Wow! This is really good so far......Heathie! **cries, huggles Heath plushie** [tooki tooki] Anyway, I hope you get the next chapter up soon! What does Duran take anyway? Sleeping pills?? ^_~