Until this point, your story has had its flaws, but it has been decent for a fic used just to kill time. But in this chapter, you just made Rosalyn's character take a very sharp U-turn without any warning. That is very poor writing. I am tempted to stop reading this right now... but I will read a bit more to see if the story shows any signs of improvement. But if this story turns out to be another Harry/Ginny fic, I will stop reading it and not even bother looking at any of your other fics.

And i was thinking to tell you that you had a nice OC...
Ciao!

Bravo! brilliant work! I'm definitely going to check your other works for this story.

I look forward to more wonderous works from you.

how can the guy who killed Voldy get stupified? Is he now an incompetent?

You need to develop your characters more. Who is Tiffany? How is she a friend, how did the stewardess end up with Harry. Guessing what's going on half the time. It needs to be explained. Regards Kyoshi

This wasn't my favourite story, but up until this chapter I enjoyed it. Then it got stupid. This chapter just seemed to be throwing in as many surprises as possible, and it took away from the impact and made the whole thing seem silly.

That was...really unexpected...CONGRATS lol. I love it when stories go in completely different directions. I am still hoping for Harry to find someone though.

OMG! That was such a good story! It was really funny and it had romance with drama and yea...FINALLY someone who can write a story without the stupid fighting and stuff and have romance, drama, and NO GINNY! =D Sorry sorta hate Giny... XP

'we're means 'we are' so actually that came out to 'we are his best friends' (no need for snooty correction)

were/we're/where

Complement/Compliment

Intrigue

'Wait' (Doesn't have an 'e' on the end.)

To/Too/Two At least (3) Different meanings. I usually keep words I get confused on post-its near my computer

Awesome story! Great job!

finally! A GOOD Harry Potter in the muggle world story!

Know of any others?

It might just be me but I am getting really confused by this story. What is the importance of the perfume? Was it the heartbreak potion? What is the chamber serpent? What are erklings and fwoopers?

Very cool, and really funny!