 Rock Raider 1/19/04 . chapter 1Did you have to be so... graphic in describing Robotnik's status? The seemingly endless parade of injuries scared me. |
 Rock Raider 12/29/03 . chapter 6Robotnik finally pulled the croakchain huh? Now Snively can truly shine. |
 Sonic Dust 3/17/03 . chapter 6Lazer back in full force, man! The student has truly surpassed the master. If I didn't have more on my plate than I can handle, I'd have gotten to this sooner; it took me like, two weeks to read it! But the story; loved the strong samurai theme surrounding Lazer now. Robotnik truly destroyed? What's next? AND WHERE WAS THE SONIC AND SALLY HONEYMOON LEMON?1 In any case, you better keep up the good work, man. |
 Raptar of Exodia 3/13/03 . chapter 6Another great one. But you know what would have been an interesting ending? Snively teleporing himself to Adrax and immediately dying of nuclear poison. But hey, I'm a sucker for poetic justice. |
 Kitterpillar 2/18/03 . chapter 6Great story! i loved it! i did not expect that of kazuo. surprised the hell out of me. can't wait for your next one! |
 Evangelion-01 2/8/03 . chapter 6Ah...the sweet taste of victory...tastes like chocolate cookies. In the end, it doesn't even matter how the job was done..it is complete. Now I go, to complete my journey along this road...this long winding road...Love is greater than hatred...change is good sometimes...
*picks up backpack and walks off slowly*
I will return...
Wonderful. |
 Evangelion-01 2/8/03 . chapter 4Anger fuel the soul, but leads to pain and suffering...not usually towards the protagonist...but so we must fight for what we believe...
The road leads onwards... |
 Evangelion-01 2/8/03 . chapter 3Insanity is highly overrated...for few pople need a sword to protect themselves. Only a fool trusts his life to a weapon. But love conquers alla nd gives the greatest warrior the best strength...
And the journey goes on... |
 Evangelion-01 2/8/03 . chapter 2Ah, the wonderful taste of scalding tea on a warm day. Cross legged meditation seems so relaxing from the daily grind of destruction of Robotnik's minions...Life passes you by so quickly...even a saumari has time to be civilised...
Continue. I'm not done yet... |
 Anthony Bault 2/7/03 . chapter 6...and I for one, can't wait for your next one! Awesome, as usual!
(BTW...is Kazuo someone else's SIFF too?) |