That was short and sweet- just the way I like it at...3:51 in the morning. Whoa... I should sleep soon. Eh...maybe I'll read just one more. You're fics are awesome!
That was still pretty good But I liked the others better, to tell the truth. Just more detail and more emotion, and it'd be great _ Daisuke is very believable here, tho, which is cool. Sayonara! _