This story is really good so far. However, the third review sucks balls.

Haha, that was quite a funny chapter
I like your portrayal of Hein(he's among my fave characters) it's fresh and amusing! Keep writing

This story sucks balls because you suck balls

Finally someone writes a der langrisser fic! good job and keep writing - Elwin is such a nice character!

I think you need to write a lot more about this story you've started. :) I love the langrisser series and its great to see someone write about it.