 RainbowHeart 2009-11-12 . chapter 7NO, you've let the story go! *mourns and wails in the background*
Anyways, I like the story - the way you build up the plot and the situation.
SO COOL! :D |
 Saiyagirl 2005-06-22 . chapter 7Awesome fic! I love it when the Saiyajin get mysteriously put out of commission. Makes them all the more human, and the story all the more interesting.
I also appreciate the way you've fleshed out each of the characters, and not just left them to stale, two-dimensional labels. No OOC here, I can tell you that. ^_^
Can't wait for the next part. |
 Jelly 2005-01-30 . chapter 7 Well, it's been more than a year since you updated this story but it really is one of the better stories I've read. I hope that if you still have interest in it that someday you will finish this story. I'll keep an eye out for updates! ^_^ |
 Moonlight-6056 2004-12-15 . chapter 7I am not sure how old this fic of yours is, or even if you are going to update it. However it at least deserves a review for the fabulous work you have done so far. The plot line is interesting and not overused, it has an original twist and I am looking forward to more chapters.
I hope you decide to continue this wonderful fic, if so review you later *waves* |
 See Saw 2004-02-20 . chapter 7This is a VERY good story. The plot is very well done and original (in my opinion. Ive never read a fic where the Saiyans get sick AND have enemys that will be arriving). It is also one of the best written fics I have read in a very long time. You have done an excellent job at keeping every one in character though it must be very hard, especially Vegeta and Piccolo. I have no clue how you do it. Please up date soon! Im looking forward to the next chapter! |
 Evil Blue Onna 2004-01-18 . chapter 7I would say it's about time you updated. It's been quite a wile now. I hope you haven't abandoned this fic.
~Evil |
 Lucy_Snowe 2003-07-10 . chapter 7 You can't imagine how I hate not to know the ending of a good story. :-D Your writing quality is excellent as is the character interaction. (We know that's what is really behind DBZ's staying power in the first place!) Please continue! |
 Dreamwraith 2003-06-17 . chapter 7Lost? Me? Naah. Though it's known to happen, I'm following this quite well. I don't want to read too deeply into it 'cuz I don't want to ruin it for myself. I'd much rather wait and bounce in my chair a bit, and then find out what happens. I like where you've taken this. *grin* It's one of the best things I've read on this site. Glad you updated, and hope you can get back to it soon. |
 LG 2003-06-16 . chapter 7 Wonderful as always! |
 Jen 2003-06-15 . chapter 7 Thanks for another chapter! It was worth waiting for. |
 Ebi 2003-06-03 . chapter 6 Your story is very well accomplished. It is quite a bit more mature in its writing style than most of the crud found on ff.net, which is a nice surprise. I just love finding worthwile gems like this that aren't the cliche-ridden dead horses that seem to haunt fanfiction. I also have to take a moment to comment that there are no major grammatical errors, which is nice as well. THANK YOU for sharing your ff with the rest of us starved junkies out here. The world needs more good fic. |
 Brios201 2003-04-03 . chapter 6 great chapter.keep up the good work.can't wait till the next one.i can't wait to find out if theres a cure. i just wish that the chapter was longer |
 Dreamwraith 2003-04-01 . chapter 6*lol* Of course I'll continue to enjoy it! I always enjoy good stories.
I may be reading too far into Goku's delerium, but might he actually have meant something by "protect them"? It may just be me, but hey, I had to ask. I suppose I'll just have to wait 'til the next chapter to find out, now won't I? |
 Brios201 2003-03-26 . chapter 5 i love your story. its interesting and i love the plot with goku destroying everything. i hope u update it soon i'll be waiting |
 Sholio 2003-03-25 . chapter 5Another excellent chapter, and finally we know what's going on, more or less. Good job with Vegeta and Goku's complicated relationship, as well as the Vegeta-Piccolo interaction. And now Gohan's got it too -- augh! Can't wait for the next chapter. |