Good story so far! I thought Puck was going to fall into the water and get lost because he can't swim... mainly because Dominic reset the game and never saved him. Well, it's good and funny so far. :)

Oh, and you might not be able to see Chapter 2 because you put it up today.

this is so stupid. THE stupidest fiction ever. you cant even understand most of it. i hate it.

Please review it so far and why cant i see the 2 chapter