I have read this story awhile ago and I must say you should continue. It's a brilliant story that should be completely told.

Please, please continue.

love it. Short, but good. more please

wonderful, i love this story. ughh... evil sister, sounds like mine...

aw, she is going to actually leave him. *sniff* it is going to make me cry!

I completely love how this story is going. Don't stop here! Continue!

So far I liked it. Interesting to see how a dark elf will interfere with Lothlorien.

I'll be waiting to read more.

So, uh, when are you updating? Hmm.hm?

Not bad, not bad at all. Although I would put more about her sister in. Just a sugestion no need to actually do it. But a very nice story with a somewhat underdeveloped plot.

great story. keep it up!!

hmmm, well, here I come to another part of your story that is slightly familiar! lol! orcs amassing and Haldir going off to fight! hmmm, it sounds familiar but i can't quite place it..! lol! hehehe, oh well! tis all good! hehehe! hahaha!

hmmm, well Missy, what can i say? lol! this archery scene seems quite familiar, but,hmmm, i can't think why...... perhaps I have read it in another story? perhaps not as raunchy but....! lol! not that I'm accusing you of anything! lol! of course not! I'm just mentioning a certain fact..... how you take it is up to you! lol!

This is some good stuff, I'm really excited about it! Very good!!



Lady Potter

This is one of the best Haldir stories I've read on here (ff.net) so far. Keep writing!

Oh, this is too funny! I love this story!

This story is very, very well written. I'm intrigued to see what happens next...