This was really sweet all the advice and then Ash taking Brock's advice in the end, brilliant! Loved it! Keep writing AAML!!

nice ending and i liked the girl and brock

Originally, right up until the end, I was GOing to give a review saying nothing but "Perfect" but that Playboy comment was just wrong. Otherwise perfect. Oh, and there's nothing wrong with one-shots there my personal favorite

oh my goodness! i couldnt stop laughing! 'the student has surpassed the master'. haahahahahhaa! very awesome!

Hey great one-shot, your other fics are great too. If you get this review could you please email me and tell me if you still update/write fics anymore?

I have no idea what I want to say really.
Let's see. This was a very well written one-shot and I wish I could write as well as you do. Not to mention the humor of it. I severly lack in that department. I'll be putting you on my favorite authors list.
Enjoy the miracle that is expression through writing,
ImagineThat

Aww, that was so sweet ^_^ I like Brocky and YAY he finally got someone. I wonder how it'll work out? Heehee. Good finish with the playboy thing, even though I can't even imagine why people would pose in those things. Anyway, I'm off track, great story and keep up the good work.
~Ashla~

This is one heck of a good fic Togepretty! Funny with a spice of romance in the same time. Unique style of writing, and Ash's one liners was hilarious! I don't mind one-shot fics actually...in fact, I'm a one-shot guy too! lol!
Keep writing!

That was really great!!! Brock got a girl!!! Quite humorous too! I really enjoyed this!!!

Enja

Aww.... that was a very cute fic. Just in time for Valentine's Day, too! I plan on typing a Valentine's fic someday soon.... And good for Brock, he got the girl. Stupid Ash... thinking like a typical *guy*. Glad he turned around in the end, though!! Write more oneshots, or chaptered fics, whatever!! I just wanna see some more good writing from you in the future!!

~Violet Emeralds~

Hee hee. This was cute! Very original ^_^ One shots can be good. You don't have to wait for cliff hangers for months. (*coughmecough*) Anyhoo... I thought it was cute

One-shots are just as good as multi-part epics, IMHO. I loved your characterization of Brock: shy and nervous, yet very gentlemanly and sincere. He comes off as such a doofus in the animé sometimes but here he's a three-dimensional person.

And I can completely relate to Misty's anger at Ash's lack of attention. It's an all-too-frequent complaint with women and their significant others today. Hopefully, Ash (and Brock) have learned their lessons. ^_~

Anyhow, it was a very cute and nicely written story. I have to remember to put you on my favorites list; your stories always make me smile.

Heeeeeeeh...This was kinda fun. Well, it was fun, but the first half was more fun than the second half. That was just kinda weird, but still fun. *sweatdrops* They was all being weird and..stuff.. *blinks* Eheheee...I dunno, we prolly coulda done with the little moral at the end but that's oky. Speaking of which, my sister's name is Caroline..*sweatdrops* Just kinda random thought there... Mwah. This review's kinda lame but I'm tired and I didn't realize until after I finished reading this.. Bwah.. At least I didn't realize during. That wouldn't've been good *^.^*;;;; Hehe..Anyways..um.. Tat's all! *^_^*;

I like one shots, actually. Then you aren't constantly waiting for the next chapter. Just read and smile :)

This was a cute little story, but I think I side with Ash on this one. He wasn't the one flirting with other ppl, that was Misty. Things like that are bad mojo. The whole "everything is bad until Ash apologizes for something that wasn't really wrong" cliche is kinda.. uhm.. cliche :)

But honestly, that's my only gripe. The writing and the story itself were great as always :)