very good story so far, please email me when
you update :)

I think its a good story so far. i think it would be cool to write some more on what liz meant about whatever it takes at the end.even cooler would be making the very ending involve around khivar and liz.

Great story so far. You did explain the Khivar and Zan but I am still confused about how Jesse could be there. WHen they left Roswell, he didn't go with them.

fantastic story. great interaction between the characters. please continue :) :)

I'm enjoying your story. Please update soon; I look forward to finding out what happens next!

it's a great story! can't wait for the next part to be added!

This is getting really interesting, I can't wait to read more!

The last update was really good, it's a little choppy where you're trying to add suspense, but I likeit, keep it up!

Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm hooked. Thanks for writing this story.

This story has a great start, I can't wait to read more.

I love your story. Please update very soon. Also is it supposed to be a max/tess fic (i hope it is) please update very very very soon
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I'ts a little out there, but I like it and am curious to see where it goes.Update soon!

The intro is good. I hope you plan on updating it. Maybe we will find out why Kivar is suddenly after the baby after Tess said that he was rejected by him.