Wow, this was an interesting idea. I never have read a plot like this, but I liked it. It was only mildly confusing, but that was cleared up once Deess and Trowa got to talking. This was a nice take on what could have happened. It was a great "what if" fiction. I also like howyou concentrated on what was going on in the story, rather than what things looked like or sounded. You kept a good hold on what each character was thinking, and that is good. You know, I would like to write the series that came before this "epilogue" of someone else hasn't already. I think that would be fun.

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This is very different from your other works. The insertion of OC is nice, kind of acceptable, considering how much I hate OC. (No offense, I'm OK with Deess, though) Frankly, this is a weird story. I'd want to see the whole multi-part thing.

not too bad. when i saw the name "Deess" i thought that it was supposed to be "deesse" which is French for "goddess"

Very good.. I think you should continue this story.. REaly I do! *Katgrrl

Weird. It was definitely weird. And you need the series for this one. Because if not, it shall forever remain weird.

hmmm...interesting...not being a real gundam fan til a few days ago and not having read many gundam fics. i think this is the third ive read ever so...i can say is it is interesting...i never thought it to be that way. and u werent listening to Mrs. Santos at all? i can definitely relate. the difference however between you and me is that i entertain the option that i need to listen to her even though i despise to do so for i consider it a mission i must fulfill at all cost... (what the hell am i saying?) hehe ja ne hanako.

And how exactly did Ms. Nadela's .. er.. Mrs. Santos'... explanation (of what Kreb's cycle... biologists?) inspire you to do this, young lady? Hmmm? (I can't even remember who Helmont is...):) It *was* admittedly confusing and you *need* a title (maybe I'm just picky but it means something to me :) but all in all okay. The parts before the fic does need to be written out, and I don't think anyone can write it the way you want it to be done :) (just a thought), but then as a standalone, it's ok (with the earlier parts, it'd be great). A sequel *would* be a good idea, but I'm still incouraging you to do the original 10 (or more) parts :)

AHHHH! I truly hope that you *are* writing a sequel, and maybe you can do a continued introspection or a continuation w/ Dees?

This story was so original - probably one of the best I've ever read! The angst was practically palpable (and now I'm a little depressed for Duo, but I mean that as a compliment). Beautifully written, I'll be looking for more of your work.

I really enjoyed this fic, it was amazing! Great job!

Very good! Please write some more!

Please write a sequel...even though Duo is my fav character, I do love the story...I want to know what happens when Trowa and Deess get to L3.

o.o ... *small sweatdrops appear* Well, it was a good fic, very nicely written with beautiful detail, but.. -_-' Somewhat confusing... but I suppose that's to be expected. You should really get yer arse in gear and write that other part! I'd like it if ya did, heh...