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Expecting Rain 1/19/09 . chapter 1
Wow, Romeo and Juliet parallel Draco and Ginny better than I expected it would. This works really well. Except I don't think wizards have guns.
Narcissa Raie 7/24/06 . chapter 1
i love shakespeare, and romeo and juliet is one of my favorites by far. great idea fora plot basis.
imelda72 1/30/06 . chapter 1
Really nice. Like some of the other reviewers, I'm not a big fan of R ironically enough, however, I'm a DG-obsessive, and I really liked the way you tied the two together here.

I knew the ending was coming-right about the time Ginny got out of bed, I thought, 'if this doesn't end with Ginny killing herself or something equally dramatic, Star will have done something wrong.' I should've known enough to trust you!

Hm...now I'll have to wait for the day when you write a HAPPY DG fic (I still can't forgive you for leaving us where you did in "Imaginary Romance."). Here's hoping!
She's a Star Fan Club 12/31/05 . chapter 1
Umm...wow...that is...wow...?
imelda72 11/23/04 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness. Forgive me for being a bit clueless, seeing as it is Romeo and Juliet, but I didn't expect that ending at all.

What I loved most about this fic was how conscious she was of the transparency of their relationship, and how you were able to get across just how empty it was in such a short fic. How desperate Ginny was, how much she realized it was useless and yet couldn't manage to pull herself away from him. Nicely done!

I think I've got to go read some Auriga to cheer me up. Te.
mystripedskirt 5/1/04 . chapter 1
A very interesting D/G. It's a ship I found I quite like recently, and you've done quite well with it.
Susan B 10/25/03 . chapter 1
Woah. That was really well written. It spooked me, but in a good way.
DarkLady 8/3/03 . chapter 1
Holy moly that was very dark... beautiful in that oh so chilling way.
Starfaerie2398 6/18/03 . chapter 1
Wow...as with it's partner story, this was just as amazing, if not more. Well written. Keep up the great work.
Meltable 6/1/03 . chapter 1
What? Why'd she kill herself? Its touching, as per you, but just leaving me thinking things about Draco I don't want to think. He's supposed to be good!
Tiny Q 5/29/03 . chapter 1
This was so horribly sad! How could you write something so terribly sad? Almost made me cry! Yet I must applaud you. You have this unique way of writting that makes the thoughts of the characters seem so real. I think that's what makes everything you write so moving. I am really liking your style, even if it is a touch depressing.
Polkat 4/27/03 . chapter 1
...cheerful. not only does ginny end up with mr "i can't act so i'll just say POTTER alot" malfoy but she kills herself [possibly becuase of afor mentioned acting ability.] as always beautifully sad and wonderful. think its a bit mean to say malfoy is her romeo because romeo was so much more than that but still v lovely.
cloudofcalm 4/16/03 . chapter 1
Whoa. For characters that haven't yet achieved something other than secondary pinicles, this was good. And you *really* know RJ. I loathe that play, (lol. Only one of the Bard's) but in this kinda of conrext, it really worked.
nothingtodo 3/16/03 . chapter 1
me like it!
Sarahjane 3/7/03 . chapter 1
That was so beautiful! You mixed your own prose w/ Shakespeare's lines perfectly. So wonderful, I really loved it! I'm not usually a fan of Romeo and Juliet, but I agree that the language is beautiful. And by paralleling it w/ Ginny's story, you added maturity and tragedy to the words. Lovely!
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